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Hello there, I will be giving a more opinion based review rather than a critical one.
Your story writing is okay, not the best but also not bad. It will definitely get you readers, as you can tell. The only problem I have is that because of the low amount of chapters, we haven't learned much about the characters that you seem to be creating many perspectives for. In my opinion, you should have dedicated a few chapters per character after you had the back story set, so you could keep readers drawn into the story if you change perspectives. Changing perspectives per chapter just interrupts the flow of reading, and confuses readers. Not only that, but it doesn't give the readers time to develop feeling towards the current narrator or main character. All that said, I won't be reading your book because I don't like the style, but I think you have potential and your writing is decent, hence the four stars. Good luck, have fun writing.
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I usually don't read anything, because I don't like almost anything. But you made me read four chapters as nothing and I loved it. It is a simple style to read, which makes it quite light. Also all the stories have something that I find familiar with animes that I liked. The stories that try to be funny ARE, and the darker chapter is not as edgy as I expected... which makes it good!
So far everytime I try to read something that catches my attention it ends up being "The adventure of a virgin protagonist" written by an edgy teen who thinks that "killing things is cool", "having s*x is cool too", "let's fuse them together! " or else it ends up being the story of a deep sadboy... Or it doesn't make any sense! I'm so tired of that, I appreciate being able to read something good. Love you, keep doing great.
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