- Chapter 196: Pretending With A Bold FaceNov 4, 2019
- Chapter 195: Growth SpurtNov 4, 2019
- Chapter 194: Superior StealthOct 22, 2019
- Chapter 193: After The LessonOct 9, 2019
- Chapter 192: Wind ChainSep 26, 2019
- Chapter 191: Wind God’s BraceletsSep 15, 2019
- Chapter 190: Hellish TrainingAug 31, 2019
- Chapter 189: The Perfect DisciplineAug 13, 2019
- Chapter 188: Eternal WarriorAug 5, 2019
- Chapter 187: ApexJul 12, 2019
- Chapter 186: SelectionJul 12, 2019
- Chapter 185: Golem ArtsMay 26, 2019
- Chapter 184: Law DecreeMay 17, 2019
- Chapter 183: A Mystery ChildMay 10, 2019
- Chapter 182: Bloodline PurityApr 26, 2019
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Well, what to say. I find the story quite average, and while I enjoyed the beginning has it become by now a chore to read.
The grammar and the use of the language are fine with some mistakes here and there. Its no masterpiece but fine overall.
My problem lies with the story itself and its presentation, mostly 2 weaknesses.
One is inconsistency. Throughout the story are elements which are not consistent, like conversations that later never happened. Or information a charakter had, but later on somehow not anymore.
The other one is the constant faceslapping. No matter where our protag goes, there is always someone who doesnt recognize her, wants to take advantage of her and gets beaten by her in the progress. Its fine to do that from time to time, but reading about it in nearly every 5th chapter just gets annoying.
I dont even understand how these other nobels cant recognize her, she has regular public appearances at the court, she is a dukes daughter and a scarf is no mask. It should never obstruct enough of her features to make her unrecognisable.
Oh, and she is a Mary Sue. Can do anything and is loved by everyone she doenst try her best to piss off.
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I’ll have to disagree. It’s not a wish fulfillment. It’s a fresh story.
But honestly I had no idea what’s going on that I just dropped it somewhere along the way. I can’t help but question the writing quality but I’m not sure, I’m not judging this or giving it a rating, I’ll leave it to someone else to properly review this
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It started very well; It was an interesting concept to see a novel from the point of a dragon from its birth but quickly and literally humanized the creature and it became another novel of wish fulfillment, from there things began to fall deeply and did not have the same desire to Continue reading since the MC (Mary Sue) can do everything right despite having almost no common sense and if you make a mistake there are no consequences.
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This is easily one of my favorites! A story about a dragon that
eventually transforms into an elf and becomes a noble. All while maintaining her original personality -- at a glance it may not seem like it, but it is true. She simply adjusts her behavior [i]slightly[/i] to meet expectations in order to further her goals.
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