It started very well; It was an interesting concept to see a novel from the point of a dragon from its birth but quickly and literally humanized the creature and it became another novel of wish fulfillment, from there things began to fall deeply and did not have the same desire to Continue reading since the MC (Mary Sue) can do everything right despite having almost no common sense and if you make a mistake there are no consequences.

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Well, what to say. I find the story quite average, and while I enjoyed the beginning has it become by now a chore to read.

The grammar and the use of the language are fine with some mistakes here and there. Its no masterpiece but fine overall.

My problem lies with the story itself and its presentation, mostly 2 weaknesses. 

One is inconsistency. Throughout the story are elements which are not consistent, like conversations that later never happened. Or information a charakter had, but later on somehow not anymore. 

The other one is the constant faceslapping. No matter where our protag goes, there is always someone who doesnt recognize her, wants to take advantage of her and gets beaten by her in the progress. Its fine to do that from time to time, but reading about it in nearly every 5th chapter just gets annoying. 

Oh, and she is a Mary Sue. Can do anything and is loved by everyone she doenst try her best to piss off.

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