A girl was being experimented because she has a weird extraordinary powers, the girl escaped from the lab and managed to reach the city, a man who named as Carl Jhonatan or Jhon for short adopted the strange girl because her wife Aliya wants to have a child but her body was too weak to make one. Jhon will either find the girl's parents or they will raise her as their own. But strange thing happened.
I don't know where this story will going okay, this is my older story stuck for years and I kinda want to remake my old ones.
Grammar and story are both extremely lacking.
On the grammar side, expect sentences to last for entire paragraphs.
On the story side, a character will introduce their special abilities by using them. This doesn't sound that bad at first, but it ruins the feeling of challenge when your character suddenly snaps his fingers and all the cameras are down.
Definitely not what I expected out of this story.
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