My Evil GF
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4.8 (23 ratings)
Synopsis
She was my childhood friend...
After we both entered high school. I finally noticed that I fell in love with her.
I was so happy when she felt the same. But we had to hide our relationship because of my family.
From that day we became a couple. But now a lot of terrible things are happening. Like how one of my close friends died by getting stabbed.
I need to figure out who is the culprit behind everything. I hope my hunch isn’t right.
Theme: Organized crime
My cover came from picrew: https://picrew.me/image_maker/43383
This novel is my entry for the Metus contest.
Genre
ActionComedyGirls LoveHorrorMatureMysteryPsychologicalRomanceSlice of Life- Chapter 32 (Yuki’s POV) June 22, 2017 3:00 pm-6:00 pmSep 28, 2020
- Chapter 31 June 22, 2017 8:00 pm-10:00 amSep 25, 2020
- Chapter 30 June 22 2017 1:10 pm-8:00 pmSep 21, 2020
- Chapter 29 (Hana’s POV) June 21, 2017 3:00 pm-10:00 pmSep 18, 2020
- Chapter 28 June 22, 2017 7:00 am-1:00 pmSep 18, 2020
- Chapter 27 (Yuki’s POV) June 21, 2017, 1:01 pm-12:00 amSep 18, 2020
- Chapter 26 (Yuki’s POV) June 21, 2017, 6:30 am-1:00 pmSep 18, 2020
- Chapter 25 (Yuki’s POV) June 20, 2017 3:02 pm-10:34 pmSep 18, 2020
- Chapter 24 (Yuki’s POV) June 20, 2017 11:00 am-3:00 pmSep 18, 2020
- Chapter 23 June 21, 2017 8:05 pm-12:00 amSep 18, 2020
- Chapter 22 June 21, 2017 12:00 pm-8:00 pmSep 18, 2020
- Glossary update picturesSep 15, 2020
- Chapter 21 June 21, 2017 6:00 am-11:00 amSep 14, 2020
- Chapter 20 June 20, 2017 NightmareSep 14, 2020
- Chapter 19 June 20, 2017 1:05 pm-10:00 pmSep 14, 2020
Table of Contents
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Hiatus - Updated Sep 28, 2020
Last updated 4 years ago
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- 5 completed
- 3 paused
- 14 dropped
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A story of a seemingly clueless protagonist being isolated by her yandere girlfriend. My Evil GF has a fitting dark comical vibe throughout the story thus far and has the potential to become a gem. I for one find this kind of story fun and cheery while having the undertone of sin floating throughout the air. I hope the writer dives deeper into the psychological as the story reaches its further chapters.
There are critical grammatical errors that do need to be sharped up to help this gem continue to shine. At times, the dialogue tends to come off as unnatural which could potentially break the immersion of the reader. So, I suggest taking a few extra moments to fix the chips in the reading for better flow.
All in all, I recommend this story so far for someone who wants to enjoy an interesting slice of life tale with characters who all seem to have unique backgrounds.
I, for one, hope to explore where this fun yet dark rabbit hole spirals as the directions this story could unfold are still endless.
Thank you for your time.
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