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The Cloud Over The Leaf
The Cloud Over The Leaf
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A spirit woke up in vast darkness, only to meet a strange entity.
"Lucky you! A second chance to live has arrived!"
Shortly after, he finds himself in the world of Naruto.
First novel, I'll do my best to entertain.

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ActionAdventureFanfictionIsekaiMartial ArtsMatureSlice of Life
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Naruto
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Age Progression Conditional Power Family Flashbacks Friendship Genius Protagonist Ninjas Spirits Weak to Strong
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      New jojmist
      Status: c30
      Jan 9, 2021

      Despite its overuse, I really enjoy the isekai genre, and I really enjoy the genre when it is combined with fanfiction. This novel is kind of that, however, I would have to say that this is isekai in perhaps the absolute lightest term possible, if at all. The MC is not the typical isekai MC as he does not retain any memories of his past life, meaning he has no knowledge of the Naruto universe. His 'other half' (Akumu) does, but he is not the MC/main focal point of the story and is more interested in protecting the MC than anything else. Though this is unique in terms of isekai plot, it is actually incredibly boring and flat to me and a major let-down compared to just having the MC have all of his past knowledge including the Naruto universe instead of having it split into a more minor character. I think the MC having the foreknowledge would have made the plot more interesting, and I have been waiting for the MC and Akumu to combine together to be a 'complete' person, but it is clear that it won't happen. Heck, it would have been better for Akumu to have been the main MC and for the current MC to not have existed at all. Because the MC is basically just an NPC of this Naruto world at this point, following him as the MC just doesn't really make sense to me for what is labeled as an isekai genre.

      Other than that, the grammar is passable but has quite a few mistakes every chapter and clearly could have used an editor, but is better than average for what you will find on scribblehub.

      Enjoyable read, but ultimately falls flat.

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      Rwvwndish
      Status: c-
      Sep 17, 2020

      this webnovel is good, I mean, the wholesomeness and the interaction between MC and other character seems cool and good. This webnovel show us a lot of wholesome content and that is a plus point. If you haven't read this webnovel. &Nbsp;you should read it. 

      oh last thing, the MC itself while he is a reincarnated person with 22 y.o knowledge, he still look childish to the family, maybe because he still wanted low-key 'bout that. Good webnovel 

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      sir
      Status: c49
      Oct 22, 2020

      This is a good webnovel, if a little weird

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      Basically he gets  reincarneted by a chaotic god who splits him into two things, one is basically the actual child that he reincarnated into, but smarter (not more knowledgeable, still a baby in that regard, but more like ability to comprehend stuff at the speed of a teen, ex. Doesn't know what a sword is) and one with all the memories but is now a Bujii (idk how to spell it) pretty cool dynamic between them

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      In response to Rwvwndish, he's not just childish, the one that talks to family is literally a newborn baby, so for others reading don't think that despite being an adult that he acts like a child, it's something different. 

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      yurikid
      Status: ch.29.the medical experiment (pt.2)
      Sep 18, 2020

      This has to be one of my favorite naruto fanfic that I have read. I find the idea really well written and I hope to see the author continue to write this for a long time.

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