I understand it is heavly inspiered and lend alot of consept from other places that I am unfamiliar with and and the author have tried to incoperate in to his story.

Personally I do not think this was executed in a good maner.

Every chapter is just filled with alot of explenation on fantasi psudo consepts of spells, powers, spirits and such in an extrem over-explenation, that makes it so I feel that I am reading an instruction guide for some mumbo-jumbo snake-potion, then rather reading a story.

My other problem is the character focus. Been forever since a read a chapter about the MC, or with any story progrss.

I ended up dropping this story at this point. Everything just became to boring and sounded more like mad rambling then a story.

The story might become better futher along but my Will is not strong enough to get so far.

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Status: chapter 07 – grem ironclaw

Oct 31, 2022

Sorry I simply can't do it. The story has an incredible amount of fat, going as far to repeatedly explain that Goblins are dumb. Yes you heard me right, apparently Goblins are dumb. Still don't get it? Goblins are dumb. Goblins. Are. Dumb. I suppose you still don't get it do you? Well how about we explain the thought process of this Goblin? He's dumb. I'm only slightly exaggerating by the way. A huge amount of content can be cut and it would improve the readers experience.

As for the MC he's incredibly boring so far. I can give it the benefit of the doubt and say that it's too early in the story to make solid judgement, but he's basically a worse version of the MC from Warlock of the Magus World. So he's literally an uber genius with a photographic memory and 2 lives worth of experience backing him. Oh and he wants to become immortal.

So yea, this just doesn't do it for me. I'd consider it a stretch to call it an isekai when he's already lived a significant portion of his life in the new world and the only difference between his home world seems to be technology. I'm personally more interested in learning about the world with the MC.

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