The addition of some alien from upper dimension or something else is just addition to why this is a nono for someone who want to read a naruto fanfic its okay if this is crossover fanfic but stand alone naruto fanfic no

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Veronicaa

Status: chapter 200

Jul 18, 2023

I gotta say, this fiction starts off very rough. There is clearly a vision from the start and lots of passion from the authors part, but that does not really help with quality. Ignoring the story for a moment and only focusing on the technical aspect, the fic starts of pretty bad. Grammar, tense, spelling. It's very rough at the start

This might be a dealbreaker for many, but I slogged through the early part and I was rewarded.

It doesn't suddenly happen from one chapter to the next, instead it's a gradual, but very consistent increase in quality.

Suddenly it's 4 hours later and you've just read 50 chapters. You take a look at the current chapter and it's as if you're reading a completely different fic (quality wise)

I can't say much of the story, it's a fairly generic premise and there is some liberty taken with the characters, but it turns into a good fanfiction.

I'm about halfway through right now, and I can say that I would've never expected such rapid improvement from the author. I'm excited for the next 200 chapters.

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sbar

Status: 454. a song of ice

Jun 27, 2023

One of few novels are actually good and I will warn the MC is op

Story is good they're some plot holes and about character development its good not amazing and not bad but good and I as a fan of naruto anime I like the changing that the author have done.

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Paulmesh

Status: rebirth

Jul 13, 2021

A brilliant work, and wonderful fan fic.

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Caizhi22

Status: c253

Jun 29, 2021

Though there are things to be criticized in the mc's actions, that can just be counted as his mistakes and flaws and it makes it somewhat realistic since we all know that there's no perfect person and not everything will go according to your wishes.

What I appreciate in this story is how the author tries hard to logically explain the techniques and their prerequisite.

I'm not really satisfied by how the romance is made since I don't think the MC has absolute reason to like the female but the romance is just a bonus to the story so overall I really like it and I don't think it deserves the rating so 5 star for me.

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Cerberus

Status: rebirth

Sep 19, 2020

Really love this novel hope it goes on for a long time concept is amazing the original ideas especially the sin of seal looks like it will be cool

just hope author doesnt drop the novel

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Orion4144

Status: c250 or so

Aug 24, 2021

I really like this naruto fanfic, even as a not-so-versed fan of naruto I find it interesting. The story is great even in the later chapters and the MC is also likable. When first reading I was very confused with names of countries and characters but after Googling them a few times I wrapped my head around it. Soooo, yeah good read and definitely cool OP MC.

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animefbi

Status: c0

Jun 18, 2021

This is the best Naruto Fanmade LN that I have ever read.

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Mastaaah

Status: c0

Jun 11, 2021

If there is a Romance then it would be perfect 5 star, a pity.

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V1S4

Status: 161. return to konoha

Jan 21, 2021

So far so good. The MC can be very mature at times but also kinda edgy. Like edgelord edgy. But all seems fine to me. The update frequency is awesome and it’s one of the things that brings me back to this. That update frequency makes me smile. The plot is good enough for me. Though some of the connections he has with other people doesn’t seem to be very deep in certain times. All in all, some minor problems but it’s good for me.

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