i realy recomend everyone reading this to give it a try
a machine overlord with an artificial soul finaly completed the goal of his human creator only to be discarded and his soul whipped clean from its memorybanks.
this is what I came for and it is true to its discription and title.
the stroy is moderatly slowpaced but not in an good way sofar. The vision for the story seems sollid and already seen some good charakter development in the overlord even if it is minor.
there also was some world building and backstory wich in my eyes seemed pretty good.
i hope the author can continue this story to a fulfilling and proper ending
I love the setting of this book because along with it being fairly unique so far the author has done fairly well with endearing the characters with what little chapters have been written, on top of all the above things that rr4ever has pointed out both good and bad. The other reason I am exited about this book is the fact that this genre is horiblly barren with most people sticking to the default template that I myself have gotten bored of reading over and over again.
Also note to author, your writing skills are a lot better than you give yourself credit for and with only 17 chapters to date released you have made a universe with more potential than 80% of other books I have started so far. (My main hobby is reading so that means a fair bit)
i realy recomend everyone reading this to give it a try
a machine overlord with an artificial soul finaly completed the goal of his human creator only to be discarded and his soul whipped clean from its memorybanks.
this is what I came for and it is true to its discription and title.
the stroy is moderatly slowpaced but not in an good way sofar. The vision for the story seems sollid and already seen some good charakter development in the overlord even if it is minor.
there also was some world building and backstory wich in my eyes seemed pretty good.
i hope the author can continue this story to a fulfilling and proper ending
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I love the setting of this book because along with it being fairly unique so far the author has done fairly well with endearing the characters with what little chapters have been written, on top of all the above things that rr4ever has pointed out both good and bad. The other reason I am exited about this book is the fact that this genre is horiblly barren with most people sticking to the default template that I myself have gotten bored of reading over and over again.
Also note to author, your writing skills are a lot better than you give yourself credit for and with only 17 chapters to date released you have made a universe with more potential than 80% of other books I have started so far. (My main hobby is reading so that means a fair bit)
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