An OP Dungeon Story done correctly. No drawn out crap, clear cut end that sets things up nicely for a much wider universe and other characters popping up in unexpected places. The story itself is somewhat realistic and strikes a balance of letting you know what's going on without it dragging on forever, but also making it not feel like you are reading a dry and boring report. All in all, well done.
No obvious flaws (like spelling, grammar etc.), and no hidden flaws (like errating pacing; bad character design or representation; plot holes).
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One of the plot holes might be autonomy stat of monsters thrown out of the window half-way through the story - I might have missed the explanation for that as I tend to skip some parts while reading
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It's hard for me to find any exceptional stroke of genius in this story, but its a very nice evening read, and I would love to read more.
When my curiosity got the better of me in the afterlife, I ended up reincarnating with several things I wasn’t supposed to have, like my memories. But I got a second chance at life, and I wasn’t going to waste it. Making a nice home in
As a young adult, I’ve spent a lot of time reading dumb stories.
“If I were one of those main characters, I’d not do things the same way as they do!” Talking out loud to myself was a bad habit of mine.
“I’d like to see you pro
After an encounter with an archangel, Claire Hill, or more aptly known as the ‘Ice Queen’ by the rest of her peers, is sent to another world.
With a personality that disregards the rest, a natural aura that pushes people away, a
An OP Dungeon Story done correctly. No drawn out crap, clear cut end that sets things up nicely for a much wider universe and other characters popping up in unexpected places. The story itself is somewhat realistic and strikes a balance of letting you know what's going on without it dragging on forever, but also making it not feel like you are reading a dry and boring report. All in all, well done.
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No obvious flaws (like spelling, grammar etc.), and no hidden flaws (like errating pacing; bad character design or representation; plot holes).
One of the plot holes might be autonomy stat of monsters thrown out of the window half-way through the story - I might have missed the explanation for that as I tend to skip some parts while reading
It's hard for me to find any exceptional stroke of genius in this story, but its a very nice evening read, and I would love to read more.
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