Dear diary,
Today I was dragged into hell by a seven-foot tall man with four horns who yelled at me for abandoning my children.
Do you remember Yu Yang? yes, apparently she was a spider demon who got pregnant after our one-night stand and had a litter of seven babies...
Seven demon babies who are going to rule the underworld someday...
I'm not gonna lie, I am scared but I will take responsibility and raise these children the best I can.
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After a one night stand, he can barely remember... Li Jun is accused of impregnating Lucifers beloved daughter and leaving her to raise seven demon kids on her own now, so Li Jun is dragged to hell by Lucifer himself and ordered to be a good father or burn in the fires of hell.
With these limited options he accepts responsibility to become a single mortal father to seven demon children
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this book is also on Webnovel
Good idea. Bad execution.
Okay, it seems like a lot of people are used to low quality translations and words not properly being translated to English from Chinese or Japanese, so when they write fiction that is similar they never use proper grammar for sentence structure or prose writing.
A lot of the time they just completely ignore PoV consistency, and fail to properly transition from one PoV or another, etc.
The ideas are surface thought and require no complexity, the writing itself is basically just an outline of a setting and plot.
There are some good examples on this website, and it is sad to see how popular this got. I think it is alright, but if you ever plan on having writing published this will never do it. You could take what you have and properly write it out or just have some fans on a website as if it is fanfiction.
If this hurts your feelings. I'm sorry, but I like to read and what you wrote made me sad.
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If you're having a long day and just need a laugh this is definitely the book for you.
So much humour held together by a string of plot that is pretty clever, there's some mythology but not enough to make this a Mythos book, there is conflict but you actually look forward to it there are some lessons that are pretty uplifting. Its a nice change from the grimdark books that usually fill web novels, there are no blackened characters no great tragedy just a ridiculously hilariously functional dysfunctional family.
Lucifer is a tired furry, Li Jun is just doing his best, Michael and Uriel are adorable, The cashier is the truest Millenial I have ever seen, there is no sadness only laughs
A great comedy, plus it has memes!
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Pretty good. It has its moments, definitely not a novel to be taken seriously or with high expectations. Full of humorous situations, some are poorly executed while others are actually... pretty funny! This novel is pretty, no, very silly, which is fun - for now. It certainly wouldn't hurt to give this a try but I wouldn't expect much from it.
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Ball of STEEL... or maybe Adamantium. Honestly, his whole family just wtf.
I know some of the old Chinese families can be like that. Nothing phases em. You throw a truck through their house and they're asking who's going to pay for all that while still eating their lunch that was so rudely interrupted. Still, dayyum, the MC was just like, 'huh, I'm a dad... huh, I tumbled in the sheets with a Lucifer's daughter... huh, I'm in hell... Holy sh*t! I need to buy diapers!'.
Practical-ism, if you can't do anything about it just get on with the rest of your day.
I love this too much to give a proper review.
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