Okay, it seems like a lot of people are used to low quality translations and words not properly being translated to English from Chinese or Japanese, so when they write fiction that is similar they never use proper grammar for sentence structure or prose writing.
A lot of the time they just completely ignore PoV consistency, and fail to properly transition from one PoV or another, etc.
The ideas are surface thought and require no complexity, the writing itself is basically just an outline of a setting and plot.
There are some good examples on this website, and it is sad to see how popular this got. I think it is alright, but if you ever plan on having writing published this will never do it. You could take what you have and properly write it out or just have some fans on a website as if it is fanfiction.
If this hurts your feelings. I'm sorry, but I like to read and what you wrote made me sad.
If you're having a long day and just need a laugh this is definitely the book for you.
So much humour held together by a string of plot that is pretty clever, there's some mythology but not enough to make this a Mythos book, there is conflict but you actually look forward to it there are some lessons that are pretty uplifting. Its a nice change from the grimdark books that usually fill web novels, there are no blackened characters no great tragedy just a ridiculously hilariously functional dysfunctional family.
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Lucifer is a tired furry, Li Jun is just doing his best, Michael and Uriel are adorable, The cashier is the truest Millenial I have ever seen, there is no sadness only laughs
Pretty good. It has its moments, definitely not a novel to be taken seriously or with high expectations. Full of humorous situations, some are poorly executed while others are actually... pretty funny! This novel is pretty, no, very silly, which is fun - for now. It certainly wouldn't hurt to give this a try but I wouldn't expect much from it.
Ball of STEEL... or maybe Adamantium. Honestly, his whole family just wtf.
I know some of the old Chinese families can be like that. Nothing phases em. You throw a truck through their house and they're asking who's going to pay for all that while still eating their lunch that was so rudely interrupted. Still, dayyum, the MC was just like, 'huh, I'm a dad... huh, I tumbled in the sheets with a Lucifer's daughter... huh, I'm in hell... Holy sh*t! I need to buy diapers!'.
Practical-ism, if you can't do anything about it just get on with the rest of your day.
“He who fights with harem tropes should see to it that he himself does not become a harem protagonist. And if you gaze for long into a narrative, the narrative gazes also into you.” ~ Friedrich Nietzsche (…probably?)
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Good idea. Bad execution.
Okay, it seems like a lot of people are used to low quality translations and words not properly being translated to English from Chinese or Japanese, so when they write fiction that is similar they never use proper grammar for sentence structure or prose writing.
A lot of the time they just completely ignore PoV consistency, and fail to properly transition from one PoV or another, etc.
The ideas are surface thought and require no complexity, the writing itself is basically just an outline of a setting and plot.
There are some good examples on this website, and it is sad to see how popular this got. I think it is alright, but if you ever plan on having writing published this will never do it. You could take what you have and properly write it out or just have some fans on a website as if it is fanfiction.
If this hurts your feelings. I'm sorry, but I like to read and what you wrote made me sad.
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If you're having a long day and just need a laugh this is definitely the book for you.
So much humour held together by a string of plot that is pretty clever, there's some mythology but not enough to make this a Mythos book, there is conflict but you actually look forward to it there are some lessons that are pretty uplifting. Its a nice change from the grimdark books that usually fill web novels, there are no blackened characters no great tragedy just a ridiculously hilariously functional dysfunctional family.
Lucifer is a tired furry, Li Jun is just doing his best, Michael and Uriel are adorable, The cashier is the truest Millenial I have ever seen, there is no sadness only laughs
A great comedy, plus it has memes!
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Pretty good. It has its moments, definitely not a novel to be taken seriously or with high expectations. Full of humorous situations, some are poorly executed while others are actually... pretty funny! This novel is pretty, no, very silly, which is fun - for now. It certainly wouldn't hurt to give this a try but I wouldn't expect much from it.
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Ball of STEEL... or maybe Adamantium. Honestly, his whole family just wtf.
I know some of the old Chinese families can be like that. Nothing phases em. You throw a truck through their house and they're asking who's going to pay for all that while still eating their lunch that was so rudely interrupted. Still, dayyum, the MC was just like, 'huh, I'm a dad... huh, I tumbled in the sheets with a Lucifer's daughter... huh, I'm in hell... Holy sh*t! I need to buy diapers!'.
Practical-ism, if you can't do anything about it just get on with the rest of your day.
I love this too much to give a proper review.
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