What would you do if you fell in love at first sight with a woman that you just met at the brothel?
Don’t you know the answer?
If you want to know what our MC would do, just take a look and follow his daily life in this fantasy world.
Author's note: Well, since many ask both privately and in the comments, I will leave a note here.
THIS IS NOT AN NTR STORY.
It is just a spicy Slice of Life story. I hope you enjoy it =D
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- Cover made by me, but it's not finished yet, there are still a few things to do, but when I have time, I will finish it.
- When you have this '*' after the chapter name is because it has +18 scenes, then be warned. If you don't want to read the chapter, feel free to skip it, I don't intend to put too much relevant information in these chapters. But in case I do, I will make a small recapitulation of the important things in the next chapter.
- Your feedback is very important to me, so please comment on what you think I should improve.
- This is my first time writing and my native language is not English, so I hope you don't mind too much about some small mistakes there may be.
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- Arc III – Extra story 2: The violent half-orcMay 30, 2023
- Arc III – Extra story 1: First meeting of the Sian women’s allianceMay 30, 2023
- Arc III – Intermission 23: Man vs. PhoenixMay 23, 2023
- Arc III – Intermission 22: Kingdom of Gauss: Extortion and preparation for a visitMay 16, 2023
- Arc III – Intermission 21: Kingdom of Gauss: Intruders (part 2)May 9, 2023
- Arc III – Intermission 20: Kingdom of Gauss: Intruders (part 1)May 2, 2023
- Arc III – Intermission 19: Kingdom of Gauss: The queen who came from another worldApr 25, 2023
- Arc III – Intermission 18: With Maid 2*Apr 18, 2023
- Arc III – Chapter 106: Searching for Ophi’s familyApr 11, 2023
- Arc III – Chapter 105: Divine skill (part 2)Apr 4, 2023
- Arc III – Chapter 104: Divine skill (part 1)Mar 28, 2023
- Arc III – Chapter 103: Sneaking into the castleMar 21, 2023
- Arc III – Chapter 102: Slave merchantMar 14, 2023
- Arc III – Chapter 101: Merchants’ FederationMar 6, 2023
- Arc III – Chapter 100: Emma’s arrivalFeb 20, 2023
- Content Warning
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- 908 reading
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I already made a rather long comment on the first chapter so I'll try to be concise here.
Very poor syntax (it is a translation) , bad prose, flat all around for descriptions and there's very little body language (it's a smut story, but still), dumb as rocks protagonist, he proposed to a slave prostitute he just met and bought that day, and the protagonist laughs like this;
"Hu hu, this is thanks to my great 'Sacred treasure that can change the life of anyone who has it in hands', I bought it for a bargain." Sian says this while showing a very thick book.
He says that out loud in public in the middle of the street. That is the writing quality you can expect.
I was worried about NTR at first, but there isn't any. However my other two worries ended up being warranted.
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So far, the story seems well thought out and the characters have distinct personalities, which makes this better than 95% of the stories here.
The pace is good with gradual buildup and well organised world building and not a lot of information dumps. Author even prepared a map.
The characters have interesting backstories and mystery to them and the motives behind their actions are not immedietely apparant.
This would be perfect with some editing but still leaving 5 stars cos of potential.
I had a good time reading this so far and I'm looking forward to more :)
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this a good stury with a op MC without comon sense, and have a really funny moments, the world of the story is really big and we have manny mysteris to read for the future, so I totally recommend this story
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