I already made a rather long comment on the first chapter so I'll try to be concise here.

Very poor syntax (it is a translation) , bad prose, flat all around for descriptions and there's very little body language (it's a smut story, but still), dumb as rocks protagonist, he proposed to a slave prostitute he just met and bought that day, and the protagonist laughs like this;

"Hu hu, this is thanks to my great 'Sacred treasure that can change the life of anyone who has it in hands', I bought it for a bargain." Sian says this while showing a very thick book.

He says that out loud in public in the middle of the street. That is the writing quality you can expect.

I was worried about NTR at first, but there isn't any. However my other two worries ended up being warranted.

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So far, the story seems well thought out and the characters have distinct personalities, which makes this better than 95% of the stories here.

The pace is good with gradual buildup  and well organised world building and not a lot of information dumps. Author even prepared a map.

The characters have interesting backstories and mystery to them and the motives behind their actions are not immedietely apparant.

This would be perfect with some editing but still leaving 5 stars cos of potential.

I had a good time reading this so far and I'm looking forward to more :)

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 this a good stury with a op MC without comon sense, and have a  really funny moments,   the world of the story is really big and we have manny mysteris to read  for the future, so I totally recommend this story

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