- 3-6 WillfulSep 25, 2021
- 3-5 Erstwhile SereneSep 22, 2021
- 3-4 Glass rageSep 18, 2021
- 3-3 Comfort (R18)Sep 15, 2021
- 3-2 Unbridled (R18)Sep 11, 2021
- 3-1 Aera GlassSep 8, 2021
- 2-67 Dawn breakingSep 4, 2021
- 2-66 IzaylSep 1, 2021
- 2-65 Seven SinsAug 28, 2021
- 2-64 In faithAug 25, 2021
- 2-63 End of bindAug 21, 2021
- 2-62 Night’s end IIAug 18, 2021
- 2-61 Night’s end IAug 14, 2021
- 2-60 Self-sacrificeAug 11, 2021
- 2-59 RetributionAug 7, 2021
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The third act of the second volume is a good example of deus ex machina and information given at the wrong time.
Throughout the story the character of Aedan has been used to fix minor inconveniences for the author. Good equipment, fixing issues with the Lust-Skill are coming to mind. To the third act, where we get several chapters of "they fight", he is like wrecking ball. It is even made clear in the text, that there is no danger anymore as soon as he shows up.
And then there is the Lust-Skill. For which details are given way earlier than the god-given explanation at the end of the second volume. Which leaves the reader unknowing, what kind of story they are reading for far too long.
And while im at it I might as well mention how confusing the gender-bender is set up. There seems to be no purpose for it. The entire thing would have worked with a female swordswoman, lonely because her male peers are just uncivilized. She is then given the Lust-Skill, and with it s*xual attraction to both genders. Now there is no missing subtext on wether or not she is happy being a woman or not.
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I enjoy the series for the most part. There's just one aspect that's really immersion-breaking and detracts from the story for me.
The whole lust skill that was randomly picked up essentially forces her into heat on a daily basis is beyond excessive. It pretty much forces her to rape others, and has some sort of addiction aspect that only seems to work on a single person for some reason? I could understand it being something that would pop up occasionally, like maybe every couple days, timeline wise. But it's become some sort of looming event that pauses everything every few hours, and has to be addressed before the story can progress again. It feels like the only reason there are R18+ scenes is because the MC is forced into it by the skill.
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I really liked the idea behind this story but as it goes on I find myself disliking it more and more. It's not that the book is bad but more that it's not my taste. Erin's character is fine but at times she really annoys me, like using her level-up points on lower levels of skills when it would be a lot smarter to save them for the high levels that are really hard to level... Then its just other smaller things that make me dislike this series (again, this is my preference and not that the story is bad)
I can't really put any examples of what makes me dislike the series since I can't really put it in words... With lyra I can't like her as a character due to her acting like a yandere
(When lyra and the elf pulled knives at each other)
Again, the series isn't bad... I would recommend trying it to see if you like it, just not my cup of tea.
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I really like this series started it today and finished just now really creative MC and really fun cast of characters, really interesting take on reincarnation and the tranmigration aspects, the r-18 scenes are professional aswell not as depraved as others out there this story is great and it has class compared to other litrpgs in the same genre.
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The story is imaginative, well thought out, and consistent. The characters have some depth and flaws, which makes them more believable. The MC is strong but doesn't feel overpowered and isn't omniscient. The world building and factions have layers and intricacies. There are many aspects that relate to the real world, but not in a way that feels like it's part of the political debate or pushing a view.
I actually completely skipped the s*x scenes, which are plentiful, although that may seem odd considering the things I write.
On the negative side, even though there are remarkably few spelling errors the story is full of language errors, with wrong word choices, wrongly phrased expressions, and grammatical errors. I would recommend for the author to use a tool such as Grammarly or find an editor who is a native speaker. This is the reason why I gave 3 stars instead of 4. Other than this issue it's a good story.
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It would be much better if the protagonist was cute, flat and small in my opinion. But I really liked the action and litRPG parts. If it was cuter it would be 5 stars ok but as it is I will give you 4.
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Brilliant story about someone acclimating to a life where power isn't everything, and sometimes the easiest path isn't the best.
The combat is super fluid and well thought out, and the author doesn't linger on filler.
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Started this about a week ago and could barely put it down. Main character is very well drawn and secondary characters are interesting and a bit mysterious in their motivations which is a good thing. Now that I've caught up I'm in the unenviable position of waiting impatiently for each new chapter! One suggestion I could offer would be to limit the euphemisms for body parts in the s*x scenes, they make it seem a bit hokey to me but that may just be personal. Keep up the great work!
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