My Succubus System
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3.7 (352 ratings)
Synopsis
After awakening in a new world a young man changes his life drastically by becoming a busty, lust craving succubus?
Adventia, world of fantasy, where adventurer classes of all types live and thrive. Our intrepid hero acquires the Succubus class, transforming her into a carnal loving she-demon with a desire for all things erotic! In fact, to level he (I mean, she) must lewd!
My Succubus System is a progressive fantasy isekai adventure with themes of sexual exploration.
Genre
AdultAdventureEcchiFantasyGender BenderHaremIsekaiLitRPGSmut
Table of Contents
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- 306 dropped
The grammar is good, the worldbuilding is good, and the first few chapters are enjoyable, but the chapters following after the tutorial area are just frustrating, so I stopped reading.
As for the reasons I dropped the story:
Chapter 20: The threesome comes off as rape-y, with Agni's succubus instincts overpowering her actual desires and the other two taking advantage of this fact. Also, Abeni's reason for wanting to dominate Agni comes off as petty when one considers that Abeni's defining character trait this far in the story is "s*xual harassment."
Chapter 22: Agni and Katrin's stuff was stolen by the three stooges (these three don't really seem evil, just frustratingly douchy). It is also shown that all three are manipulative backstabbers.
Chapter 23: Agni reacted too calmly to the incident, as if she is okay with being taken advantage of (basically a doormat character).
Chapter 24: The flash-forward was the last straw for me. It just shows the protagonist being abused, stomped on, and stabbed by a random guy three months into the future. Talk about a sudden tone shift.
This story really needs a "Manipulative Characters" tag
even if it's only for chapters 20-22.
This is also my first review so take it with a grain of salt.
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The story and world are intriguing and fairly well written, though not exactly what the author intends. (This is based off of posts in the comment sections.) Unfortunately the majority of the smut scenes do not include any consent (aka they are rape) and that just isn't what I was looking for when I read this.
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I really enjoy most of this novel but fact that the MC is constantly emotionally abused and just forgives/ignores the culprits is just too much for me to continue with.
P.S. I would add a girls love tag.
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The story starts well, the protagonist is not a f**king pervert and most of his thought are because he becames a succubus yes not incubus but succubus. He is your typical japanese harem protagonist. He just CAN'T let go, is so exaxperating that I have a knot in my throat while reading this. You are a succubus a lust demon can you act as one? Well, if you are expecting a very smuty story go away. If you want a story like "Kumo desu ga?" but with a SIMP succubus go ahead.
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Basically skimmed chapter 60 to 110. As of about chapter 60, MC hasn't had s*x (that we've seen) since chapter 22 or so. What is even the purpose of writing a story with a succubus as the main character if they don't actually have any s*x? With anyone? Ever? Seriously, it might as well not be tagged smut at this point. If someone could direct me to when MC starts actually being a succubus I'd be glad to pick it back up from whatever chapter that is, but I'm fed up at this point. (Not like every story has to be full of s*x, I'm not some insatiable horn dog, but when you make the main character a succubus and title the story my succubus system, I expect the LITERAL s*x demon to have s*x more often then once every hundred chapters.)
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Good grammar, and good story overall. A few things though.
While the author is quite stubborn that there is no rape, it doesn’t change the fact that it was not consensual. Yes, Agni didn’t fight back, but it’s also because Agni’s succubus skill “Succulust” practically forced her into being horny. The fact that she was that calm after being robbed doesn’t make it better.
After 100 chapters, there is no real plot, no real goal in mind. Agni does whatever pops up, but does not mention at all what she wants to do next.
I agree with the author that 2 days after becoming a women and succubus, one might not be too comfortable, but considering weeks and 100 chapters, I do expect there to be some character development. While Agni isn’t as opposed to s*x, she isn’t seeking it like expected of a succubus.
So far, my impression is that while the concept and beginning is excellent, the poor plot and mediocre character development makes it slightly boring and repetitive. Another thing I’ve noticed is the author’s lack of willingness to accept feedback; they’ve been denying a lot of things (not just the rape). One thing is true though: if you don’t like the story, go read something else you enjoy.
PS. While this review may seem pretty negative, I see nothing majorly wrong with this story and it can be an enjoyable read to some.
PSS. If a lot of readers seem to be saying the same thing, take a step back and review it! If you still find yourself in opposition, just ignore it; no need to make a post/author’s note every few chapters addressing it.
Final ratings:
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[After awakening in a new world a young man changes his life drastically by becoming a busty, lust craving succubus?
Adventia, world of fantasy, where adventurer classes of all types live and thrive. Our intrepid hero acquires the Succubus class, transforming her into a carnal loving she-demon with a desire for all things erotic! In fact, to level he (I mean, she) must lewd!
My Succubus System is a progressive fantasy isekai adventure with themes of s*xual exploration.]
This novel was a major disappointment for me, I'm not saying it is bad but is dosen't reflect what the title and synopsis would lead one to expect upon reading it, the synopsis would lead a new reader to think this is a novel about a man turned into a "lust craving succubus", "a carnal loving she-demon with a desire for all things erotic", instead we get a MC who can't accept the situation he is in, he doesn't identify as a women and actively avoids s*xual situations as much as he can, the synopsis would make you think the MC would have to have s*x sometimes just to level "in fact to level he (I mean she) must lewd!" but the MC decides to level by killing mobs like a regular adventurer.
My last complaint is from the s*x scenes that do happen, most of them are not from the mc's choice, most are him being forced into the situation.
I'm not trying to be overly negative about the novel, it's not for me but others might like it, if the synopsis gets changed to reflect the mc's personality and what to expect from the novel I would change my star rating.
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Worldbuilding is decent but expect abuse to be constantly heaped onto a traumatized MC for their "own good" and her to accept that and consider it normal. The litrpg element itself is not that great; the MC gains exp from s*xual situations yet actively avoids them until forced. I went through most of the available chapters hoping it would improve. It did not. If anything it went further down the rabbit hole with the MC being abducted, restrained and forcing into an "intervention" to remove her reservations about s*x triggering a full on ptsd episode. Their solution to this, is to punish her with "s*xual torture" if she doesn't complete assigned tasks. Anyway I'd avoid if you're fetish isn't normalized abuse and corruption/moral degeneration. At least the tagging is correct. 160+ chapters and no romance, just gals being pals.
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Alright, I know I'm a bit late on this story, but I have thoughts. I want to mention two things.
1. The 1st thing I want to touch on is the r*pe scene in question. As an aspiring writer myself, I took some early advice to heart. & that is as a writer, you're intention doesn't matter, but rather the interpretation of the reader. If readers are complaining that they feel like a scene is r*pe, even if that's definitely not what I was intending for that scene, then I failed somewhere in the writing process for that scene. And there's alot of people complaining that they were uncomfortable with the scene. So regardless of the author stating that they didn't write the scene as r*pe, so many people stating their discomfort, will give me pause and cause for revaluation.
In addition to this, we know that MC is weaker Stat wise then the two girls, they manipulate her to get her alone, then hold her down against her will, despite the MC clearly stating that she wants them to let her go. Idc if the writer makes the excuse that she could've used whisper. In a high stress situation, it's difficult to think clearly and rationally, and it may not have occurred to her to use any of her skills. I also don't care that she eventually got into it in the end, because several other readers pointed out, that her class could've influenced her. Also, the main bully basically has been s*xually harassing her since the moment they met. And it can't be passed off as just women shenanigans, because she clearly is a lesbian and is trying to dominate other women.
2. I think the story on a macro level somewhat fails at its premise. The MC gains a succubus class, however, they themselves aren't very s*xually active. That's okay. Nothing wrong with that. Except the story is advertised as smut and a lustful & lewd character. AND all the side characters find that to be an issue as well. The idea that a gender bent character who isn't comfortable being s*xually promiscuous is somehow forced into situations by side characters to embrace their s*xuality, despite the MC clearly not being conformable with their advances. And this is all passed off as somehow the MC embracing their femininity and what it means to be a woman. That's kinda... f**ked.
I think the flaw lies in the premise. Most stories that feature succubus characters, they either are already s*xually active, they are lustful but shy, or the story is somewhat depicting a downfall of the MC, where a prudish MC is tempted and succumbs to lust. Neither of these circumstances fit with the MC of this story. For all interactions, the character doesn't seem to be a very s*xually active person. Sure, he has lustful thoughts, but at the start of the story, he's surrounded by naked women. All men would struggle with that. So the flaw is the story wants to be smut, but has a MC that isn't comfortable being s*xual, but then forces them into situations that are lewd and s*xual....
In the end, I don't see any self respecting and practical trainer is going to train naked...
I got to chapter 42. 2 stars.
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Could not really get into this one. The system is probably the worst I have seen for a lot rpg very harsh with Timers or loose everything. After they went to the first share I found I just didn't care enough to continue.
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