- 96. True Power (I)Apr 20, 2021
- 95. Settling the ScoreApr 15, 2021
- 94. Multi-pronged AttackApr 13, 2021
- 93. Prepare for BattleApr 6, 2021
- 92. Difference MakerApr 4, 2021
- 91. The Decisive DayApr 4, 2021
- 90. Sharing Secrets (II)Feb 28, 2021
- 89. Sharing Secrets (I)Feb 26, 2021
- 88. Securing His Third TreasureFeb 24, 2021
- 87. True StatusFeb 23, 2021
- 86. RecognitionFeb 21, 2021
- 85. Letting You GoFeb 18, 2021
- 84. A Familiar Face, AgainFeb 17, 2021
- 83. Sudden and Perilous TurnFeb 14, 2021
- 82. A Closer LookFeb 13, 2021
Table of Contents
A fat mountain boy is visited by a jade beauty, and decides to embark on a cultivation quest.
Spelling & Grammar 2/5 - Typos and missed words are fairly common.
Style & Story 3/5 - Fairly bland, aside from the hook things follow standard cultivation expectations. It is reasonably well written and consistent. There is additional emphasis on the interactions between low level cultivators and worldly concerns that lends nuance to the protagonist's exploration of the world. What would otherwise be a banal intro saga, becomes a journey of growth.
Characters 2.5/5 - While the protagonist does not strictly conform to the archetype of cultivation MC's, I am superised at how two dimensional he still seems. He rather reminds me of Son Goku from the original Dragon Ball series. Side characters naturally have even less development as they come and go from the narrative. However, both Sun Xueling and Alisha Patel are characterized relatively well.
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