So keep in mind, I've only read the first two chapters to give it a fair shot post the initial one, but I think I've seen enough of those chapters in any way carry the same tone.

First off, I'll start by saying the grammar is good for the most part, I noticed a few mistakes but that is completely normal.

To start with what I didn't like, the plot itself. It is a complete mess of jumbled ideas, something straight out of a fever dream. The protagonist is completely unlikeable, and as he is in the spotlight, that drove me off quickly. The fact that he is 22 when in reality he talks like a 10-year-old constantly throws me off, to me he just seems like a self-insert. My apologizes if it really is and I missed that somewhere. 

The reactions from the other character (s) just didn't feel like appropriate responses for the situations they were in. I understand this is a parody of sorts, but it should serve more to deconstruct the isekai genre rather than play up the same antics to an annoying degree. 

I hope the story improved from this point, and if it really did then I hope the author will adjust the starting chapters to his current level.

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This got weird really fast.  It was pretty good up til like mid 20s in chapters and it just went off the rails.  It lost any semblance of logic and completely trashed any form of coherency.  The main character randomly just leaves the planet and trains for the next million years and comes back.  Now he's like a cold calculating machine that doesn't have emotions because of his intelligence.  The problem is the character is still braindead in his decision-making.  It's like we're told he doesn't have emotions but somehow still his decisions seem driven by emotions.  It doesn't make any sense.  The beginning chapters also did a decent job of filling you in on who the characters are, but that just stopped again in the mid 20s.  Just keep introducing characters and different POVs with no explanation of what any of it means.  It's honestly like the drunk rumbling of a man for how disconnected everything is.  The story was building up to be like a slice of life "I'm so strong, but I'm chill most of the time." type of story.  Then they introduced a bunch of random sh*t that just completely dumped over that.   This story screams to me that the writer wants to explore a bunch of different plotlines and different genres and will just randomly switch them on a whim.  This leads it to be completely nonsensical.  I would not recommend this. 

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Probably spoilers ahead.

Having read for a while, I can safely say that I hate the Main Character. He is so smart that emotions don't affect him (supposedly) and is so powerful than he can nerf his intelligence to above genius levels instead of incomprehensible to all mortal minds with a simple enchanted ring (that struggles with that anyways). All after a very long, millions of years or more training montage in subjective time.

This is missing a tag, idk which it is, but MC isn't quite villainous so far, is very much apathetic to nearly everything going on, is quite intent on interacting with the characters, yet wants the Touhou Project to stay on course?

This is a terrible review, but if you like villainous/apathetic/morally blind (?) characters, then this might be for you.

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Not recommended for Touhou fans. As a Touhou fan myself, I feel like this story made certain characters, especially Mokou, OOC. Speaking of Mokou, I feel like she was turned into a generic tsundere, and theres no way she would ever fall in love with someone so quickly, especially someone as unlikable as the MC. Additionally, the MC REALLY looks and acts like an incel. From the moment I  saw him use the word “females”, this story was doomed. Reading this story feels like reading an edgy teenagers self insert fanfic. While the story has potential, I don’t see it shine, as the MC was OP in a very lame way, and the characters dont have enough in-world time to truly develop. Overall, if you are a genuine Touhou fan and want to read a story with your beloved characters, this is definitely NOT the story. Especially as a Mokou fangirl, she was pretty much ruined here.

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The thing is it not that your story is bad but the update rate is too slow... 40 chapter in 2 years...

Do I want to suffer myself on the cliff hanger that lasting months?

Ps: after MC getting to the nonsensical level it turn stupid...

I feel like it drop to the 5 years old writing where anything go...

The power is nonsense! It come from nowhere,

Most chracter are just brush through and feel empty like they just a sory excuse of a npc.

They are superficial and feel fake.

And the MC do whatever with no consequence, wait there a obstacle let me go train alittle then anihilate it for fun...

He no longer think... he just go break thing for fun and don't care about anything.

If I was the source he would be anihilated already body and soul including existence... so that he was never exist in the first place!!!

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If you came here looking for something interesting, you found it. This is a fanfic about dragon ball and other anime and games. I enjoyed reading it so much that I started following it. If there is one thing you can expect, it is a good read that is not tiring and tedious: each chapter with a WANT MORE. Anyway, read, comment, rate it 5 stars (the author deserves it), and recommend it.

A guy died on Earth and gets a chance to be reincarnated with the "power" and "appearance" of his choice (there's more, read on to find out) and in the comings and goings gets involved with strange and peculiar existences.

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Good novel, op MC but great to easy reading novel, just have some fun

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As a huge DBZ fan, I have enjoyed it so far. (And I know nothing about touhou project)

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This story is ridiculously good!I thought this would be just another dumb mind numbing fan fic with a stupid power level.......I was right about the power level but the story is well designed and executed!I do not know much about the world he is in but nether does the MC so there ya go! LMAO..... anyway just read it!

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