Up until the most recent arc I'd have rated it 5 stars, a dark setting with a cast of broken characters and some quite good futanari smut.  It sold a setting where people have basically given up and descended into hedonism before they die.  The pacing was slow with like two days over 200 chapters, but it was still interesting. 

Now there's been 90 chapters of just meaningless torture p*rn in a row at this point without any semblance of a plot anymore, and the pacing has slowed to basically a standstill, I think like 2 hours have passed in 90 chapters.  I mean I guess if you like reading about meaningless death and pain it would be good for you.  The author probably was trying to really push that this world is terrible, but they'd already done that, and this is just beating a dead horse.

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Great start but falls off with the latest arc. Would have rated it 5/5 otherwise - the current arc gets a 1/5 from me, so averages as 4/5.

A well written (mostly) explicit novel. The world is dark, really dark, and in a perverted, s*xually charge way, which in its OTT way adds to the comedic tones. The other characters are fleshed out enough so come across as real people not walking 2D onaholes, which is a failing of a few of the other explicit novels. The s*x scenes - and there are a lot of them -  are well written, interesting, very s*xy, often intense but often perverse at the same time. But the author has a light touch, making them an enjoyable comedic read - the story doesn't take itself too seriously, and so you shouldn't either.

The problem, as I see it, starts with the current arc starting at chapter 220 that has been  drawn out far too long and I am finding is pointless - I am struggling to stay interested in this part - but hoping it finishes soon so the author can get on with an otherwise very enjoyable story.

Update at Chapter 363: Now 2 stars - this lost just about all of my earlier rating of 4. Story has deteriorated to a pointless mess - approximately 150 chapters later and about 2 hours have passed with just about no plot or character development - its been either torture/ultra-violence followed by chapters and chapters of tentacle hentai. So unless you have a really high tolerance for rinse/repeat p*rn I think you need to skip this one from chapter 220 until sometime in the future when the author remembers to get back to the story.

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Honestly it started pretty well. It was interesting and dark but there was some sense of a purpose and a drive. The main character was interesting, the side characters while crass, crude, and deviants were fun and had some endearing features.

After the coliseum arc it just seemed to get mean spirited, both to the world and its supposed heroes. The main character has lost sight of anything good or worth saving in the world and anyone that would drive her to make it better, to center her and encourage her. Now it's a story of rape, incest, revenge, and just a lot of negatives.

It's unfortunate, but I'm going to have to drop this.

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!!!!! WARNING !!!!! THIS IS NOT FOR EVERYONE!!!

The themes of this story are much heavier and darker than most, think Akame ga Kill or 40k Slaanesh Edition. 

While I was torn at the first 50 chapters, I decided to press on and see if it was my kind of story. And to my surprise, it got better. The passive protagonist was what turned me off at the beginning, but she improves, getting her footing and slowly becoming an active protagonist. 

The writing is immaculate and plots thought out. The only gripe would be the exceptionally long s*x scenes, but what do you expect from a s*x story.

All in all, a solid 4.4/5

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Look, you know what kind of story this is based off of the title and tags. This review isn't specifically about that, this review is about what got me to start reading and what got me to stop.

At the beginning, it was a even handed balance between smut, grimdark storytelling, and rpg elements. It had excellent worldbuilding and properly thought about how a world beset by horny demons would actually operate in a isolated and desperate situation, including some parts that had never occurred to me.  

And then the most recent arc started.

What the previous part did right, this did wrong. It's honestly masturbatory how the author treated the various characters, often introducing one to kill and/or f**k it in the same chapter (occasionally doing both).  There was none of the same care and effort put into the story that it started out with, which is honestly such a shame.

tldr: author started writing overly indulgently and screwed over the character traits introduced. 

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I made it to this chapter, and I have 3 main complaints with this story.

First, the author does not know how to manage a good balance between history and obscenity. The guy clearly knows how to write smut, he's capable of writing 30 entire chapters in a row of just smut. Honestly, many times it happens; It's like he writes a bunch of smut chapters and then stops doing it for a long time until he gets back to it. There is no middle ground! That ruins the pace of the story and makes you feel a little fed up, honestly.

Second, the prominence of Beatriz. There are times that Beatriz simply disappears for a bunch of chapters so that the author can tell us something. Now, don't get me wrong, this wouldn't have to be a bad thing; Ideally, it would serve to introduce us to other characters or give us context of what is happening elsewhere, or perhaps tell us something that will be useful for later. Except that many times what he shows us has no relevance to us, like the avalanche of chapters (which I skipped by the way) where the King appears. I have 0 interest in watching a stupid king f**king his daughters and servants for like 30 episodes. He's not even the protagonist, why are you showing us this? I want to see futanari and I want to see Beatriz, not some characters that neither interest me nor have you developed by f**king each other. I don't even know what most of them look like because besides there being a lot of characters, sometimes they don't even bother to describe them. Or if he does, he only does it once and then I have to keep going back to previous chapters or trying to remember what this NPC that I don't know if he's relevant to the story or not is supposed to look like because they might kill him off in the next chapter.

Third, Beatriz's s*xual orientation. The main attraction of this story is precisely that of a man reincarnating into a futa woman. When the old man was asked why he wanted to be reincarnated as a woman, he said: 'Because girls are hot! And I want to be good! But I also want to f**k other girls! And many of them! Small, voluptuous, MILFs and her daughters, princesses and her sisters... If I see a hot girl with a nice ass, I want to bend her over and f**k her right there. And I want everyone to like it and order more!' Beatriz in her previous life was clearly heteros*xual and she clearly has no interest in men. Repeatedly, every time a man showed interest in her, she reacted with rejection and disgust. Then, in chapter 366-367, in a very forced and convenient way, a character named Bob starts f**king Beatriz ?‍♂️ in a pseudo-rape. She had already had relationships with other FUTA girls and there is no problem because that is the main bait and attraction of this story, but she had relationships with a man, a decision that she clearly would not make in a normal circumstance and she did not do it. It was supposed to be to pretend in front of the monsters, but the pretend became real and ended up happening. It was something too surreal, crazy and unpleasant. Guy Bob was literally on crack and imagining crazy things in his head. The guy isn't even that important of a character, just a random NPC. I tried to ignore it, but in chapter 414 he stopped by again. About 3 random NPCs, originally eunuchs until Beatriz gave them a cock with her powers, they started f**king her and not only that, but it was rape. Once again, the situation was forced just like the previous time. What was most upsetting is that Beatriz was clearly raped by these guys and when it came time to punish them, she didn't do it. She simply turned her penises into vaginas and then masturbated them. WTF! That's not s*xy, it's disgusting and disgusting, and it's not a punishment either. Because Beatriz, even though she's clearly straight, isn't she more upset with them because of that? They're not even that important characters, just NPCs. What bothers me the most is that in a 'normal' situation Beatriz would never have relations with a man. That's why the author had to do all this nonsense and make up this whole excuse, in addition to making Beatriz's character act stupidly and inconsistently. Call me crazy, but in a world where death, cannibalism, and s*x in broad daylight is commonplace, I would be super alert about any man or woman who might have bad intentions toward me, but no, she just gave them penises. with his powers without thinking about the consequences and we already saw how it ended.

In conclusion, starting with chapter 422 I decided to skim the rest of the novel. I don't know if Beatriz has relationships with other men, I don't think so, but I might have missed something. But I can say that from what I've seen, the first two problems I mentioned are repeated. Anyway, the author hasn't published chapters since April, so I think this novel won't continue. But if you continue it, keep in mind the problems that I mentioned to you, author. Really, if I hadn't liked this novel in the first place, I wouldn't even bother complaining about all this, and I think Fost, HelloHound, TGK700, and I think Freesoul too, who left reviews when they were on chapters 363, 365, 373 and 371 respectively, share my concern about the third point, while the others share my point of view about the first and second point.

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So, ugh. Ok, so, the smut scenes are very well written and hot, and I've found the plot to be interesting. The problem? 99% of the story is devoted to the smut, and the plot only makes progress VERY slowly. I'm nearly 400 chapters in, and it has only been TWO DAYS in the story. The chapters are relatively short, and nothing happens for most of them, besides smut, and the occasional gorefest (ie, when some other character decides to be cruel during a fight)

I only made it as far as I did because I binged the story, but I can't imagine reading it under its usual schedule, so I'm not even going to bother catching up to the latest chapters.

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Well uh, you’re reading this and have already looked at the name and the tags. So, the smut is great and has all the futanari you could ever ask for. The story also has a really interesting setting. I’m not gonna say anything because spoilers but the author is doing great!

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There are good elements. The first 214 chapters are pretty good, and there's a few parts after that are also enjoyable. The author loves to write tons of great, if extreme, smut and the world is somewhat interesting.

Unfortunately, the author is always cutting away to characters that I (and from what I can see in the other reviews and comments, most other readers) just don't have any interest in, and that get killed off or just disappear afterwards. Only two days have passed over the course of the entire story so far, and it moves very slowly, in fact it's getting slower.

The power level of the MC is also very unclear. There are a few times when enemies that we just saw were much stronger than her, suddenly seem to change to being weaker than her, but without her having gotten any stronger. We are kept in the dark about how the MCs stats compare to anyone else in the world, and aren't shown what skills she has available to buy. It seems a lot like the author just wants to be free to do whatever and not need to worry about having the story make sense. I get that it's a smut story, but in a story this long, there needs to be more than just that to hold it all together.

It's all the more frustrating because the parts of the story that are good, are very enjoyable, and if the author wanted to, they could easily write more of the story like that. They just seem to prefer to focus on random nobodies f**king the sh*t out of each other, then dying.

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