Our boy-genius protagonist decides that he's bored of his world and attempts to travel to the Marvel Multiverse to start a new life.
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The story takes place in a marvel universe that is fusion of 616 in the comics and the MCU. Some of the Marvel characters are warped a little, but not much. Some of the situations that Marvel characters have to deal with would never happen in a comic or the MCU because it just wouldn't sell. BUT the characters do react in a way that is entirely plausible considering the characters' backstories. I don't correct actual grammar mistakes because I do them on purpose for writing purposes, but I do enjoy people correcting spelling/ editorial mistakes that slip through the software (I do go back and delete those comments though since they take up too much space). If you have comments, questions, or suggestions, then the comment section is the place (I do make super long or irrelevant comments into spoilers. I haven't had any actual spoilers, but I'll delete the comment if that's the case)
(Art is not mine, but maybe I'll commission someone to draw one for me)
- AnnouncmentMar 7, 2022
- Chp 67 – A LimitMar 7, 2022
- Chp 66 – Personal BusinessMar 7, 2022
- Chp 65 – Spider TrainingMar 7, 2022
- Chp 64 – Peter ParkerMar 7, 2022
- Chp 63 – Fight ClubMar 7, 2022
- Chp 62 – DistractionsMar 7, 2022
- Chp 61 – FacadesMar 7, 2022
- Chp 60 – RevelationsMar 7, 2022
- Tyler’s Powers and AbilitiesJan 12, 2022
- Chp 59 – RegretOct 19, 2021
- Chp 58 – Bonds and RitualsOct 19, 2021
- Chp 57 – Hunger Oct 19, 2021
- Chp 56 – Liquid MetalOct 19, 2021
- Chp 55 – Cute Rabid AnimalOct 19, 2021
- Content Warning
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Hiatus - Updated Mar 7, 2022
Last updated 11 months ago
- 1371 reading
- 122 plan to read
- 21 completed
- 38 paused
- 52 dropped
I'll keep this short it bad and need work pacing is all over the place, characters who are established act in such a far cry away from they are suppose to be, there is illogical information put in that doesn't make sense for even comic crazyness. If it goes on the way it has been this novel will always be 1-2*.
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This need a lot of work, the concept is good but the execution could be better. The author should also do more research on the people, the places he describe as well. Gwen is majorly OOC and some other characters as well. The pacing is horrible, Author do something about it, why don't your MC take a break between action? He is constently moving, you got an AI in the story, why don't you make more to take off the pressure on your character? The Rape and Yandere stuff... are you writing a japanese light novel? You should balance those obsessive characters more, they are liabilities at this point.
One of the thing I don't like is how he reveal that he is a SI to everyone to people he doesn't know for long, this could be used against him, this is marvel after all. It's like the author doesn't have an outline and write as he goes. I hope he does have a plan.
The chapters are hard to read as well, he need a beta-reader and editors to support him. I think a rewrite is in the card for this story.
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Enjoyable.
An ability that lets you absorb things and reform/recreate them into different things. A rare ability to find in novels but a versatile ability.
Looking forward to see how this story works out!
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10 chapters so far damm well whritten in my opinion.
it is a fan-fic of the marvel universe and I like it and would recomend others reading it.
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Quite a fun story. It's mostly canon marvel stuff, with a twist added to it by the author, making it extra fun to read. The characters actually have some depth to them for once with an MC that's not a huge beta, dense af and a goody two-shoes.
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It good enough but it lock realistic emotion in some of your character and I do enjoyed it just don't dwell on the character emotion if you are new to reading the story (READER'S)
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The main character just knows everything and is great at everything as soon as he does it. Makes for a very flat and uninteresting character. Overpowered is fine but it requires something interesting, be it a drawback, a flaw or just an interesting personality. Tyler is almost a robot, his AI has more personality.
The sister and Gwen are rapist and rapist wannabes just as a lazy way to make a harem and make the story edgier. Also neither of them cared enough about the Tyler to try talking first.
The story is jumping around at a frantic and desperate pace to try and include literally all of marvel and all the characters from marvel in the story. Because of that the story just feels like it has no real focus.
The edgy rape fetish continues when 6-7 girls, each with their own unique superpower, that previously escaped a well funded and legitimate facility designed to hold super powered individuals captive are then recaptured by some two-bit druggies and rapist. Then Tyler just effortlessly walks over them with no effort. While rape is consistent in the story, the strength and legitimacy of scenarios is not.
The story has some rather interesting ideas but fails to make them feel meaningful or matter in execution. Simple characters that are mostly one dimensional or just a name. (Whatever personality they might have had in a comic or movie doesn’t count and neither does it count when we’re just directly told by Tyler what their personalities are.) A story that’s constantly bouncing around. The effortless and instant progression of Tyler’s strength. To top it all off it’s a dead story that’s been dropped.
If the story was a bit more focused, paced better and reasons that seemed slightly legitimate were given for the readers to care for the characters then the story would be great.
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4.5 stars
Something with the pacing seems a little off, but overall the quality has been good. The author also seems to be improving in his writing, and the characters are built well. The characters have depth.
I was recently reading a story about an apparent genius who was a typical beta MC, but you won't find that here. The MC is a genius and uses his knowledge to his advantage. I look forward to the future chapters.
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a great series and some characters may be inaccurate, but if you can look past that you may find this fun!
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There's not much to complain about at the start, but later you could tell the Author losing interest as he stated in the announcment. If you're into Marvel fanfic this is on of the few good ones i've read, definitely recommended. Hopefully the author will pick this up or start a new project in the near future.
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