Well, to start: It's Hentai porn, and it's about as exciting to read as you'd expect. Even the Synopsis, Author's comments at beginning/end of chapters, the story itself, everything is written as a horny 16 y.o. High on himself. Shure it's true to genre, and true to character, but also incredible predictive, annoying, and a utter waste of time reading. -Just like any other mass produced Hentai story is.

Compared to well written smut, I would give this story a 3; its not poorly written, this is just a generic version of mass produced hentai stories. Seeing almost every chapter is "to be edited", "being edited" or just purely notes from author, I'm landing on a 2.

I do hope the author comes up with something that makes this worth reading, hentai can be done well, this just isn't there yet.

Edit: typos, and tried clarifying.

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Plot : 1/5 meh

Characters : 1/5 generic 2d

H scene : 1/5 nothing new, so-so

World building : 1/5 meh

Overall : 1/5, tbh theres more but I think its enough

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Just sad overall, the novel lacks any form of polish and didn't even get off it's feet before the author pulled the plug on it.

The author keeps saying "trolls" are voting one star on this novel and asking the readers to vote five stars for more chapters as well as joining their patreon, but they doesn't put out content worth five stars.

I gave the novel a chance, the novel disappointed me, I don't mean to troll anyone.

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So far I have enjoyed the story as well as the H scenes.  Occasionally i've seen an grammatical error or two but but not very often.

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