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The first half or so is a bit rough I won't lie, But underneath that roughness is something pretty good.
The biggest issue I found with the story is that the Super-Carrier seems to have little to do with the rest of the story. I wasn't expecting lot's of usage of it cause it'd be a really short and not great story is the MC can just use Spaceships for any problem. But after the 2nd chapter or so, We haven't seen it once since then.
The story has something that I love such as when sick people are picked up from a crappy life or almost death and is nursed back to health. I also am really just liking what's happening.
There are only two other issues I have with it. That is, The writing structure is a bit weird and at times I feel like we aren't explained anything at all and then we sometimes get moments that feel like jump cuts.
The final issue is that I think this could've started as a normal isekai story and would've worked better. Would probably make it a little less confusing at the start also. The MC doesn't even really need to be an AI/Android. Could've just been gifted with an OP body with a supercomputer of a mind.
This is more of a personal taste also, But the MC, in my opinion, should've been female. Most of the story I would forget that the MC is actually male. The relationship with the little girl the MC is taking care of just seems it'd fit a ton better if the MC was a female. I can very much see the MC having a more big-sister/Mother type of relationship with the loli they're taking care of. I guess since the MC is an Android now that they can always be put into a female chassis. But wouldn't really sit well still.
I won't go into too much detail so I am not spoiling much. But I do think this is a pretty good story.
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