Don't let the beginning deceive you

The long prologue makes this look like a serious western-japanese hybrid fantasy but that's just a front. It quickly turns into a comedy then smut in the span of a few chapters after the last prologue chapter.

The usage of punctuations in this WN is pretty funny as well.

Grammatical/wrong wording can be spotted here and there but it's nothing too big tbh.

So yeah if this really continued like a serious or at least semi-serious western-japanese hybrid fantasy then it would have potential. Sad that it turned into a comedic smut then got basically cancelled. I'll rate this a 3.4/5

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Quite a good novel and different from others. However, you need to know what you are going into.

If you are wondering why chapter 1 is not the first chapter, it's because all the "chapters" before are the prologue. It basically include the MC's past life, how the MC is reborn, the life of the MC's mother, and a lot of worldbuilding. Then chapter 1 and others are from the MC point of view.

The relationship are quite weird with a lot of lesbian, futanari (girl with d*ck), etc and most of the novel after the prologue focus on smut and romance.

I think it would be better to have more action, like wars etc (with the MC included) instead of full smut. Both of them is okay, but it should be balanced (just as all things should be ?). Moreover, we have no clue what's the MC strength and what abbilities she has even after so many chapters. Is she as strong as her mother? Is she stronger than a demon lord? Stronger than her maid? We have no clue about that so far but we know that she is supposed to be OP.

So it's a okay-novel, but you need to know what you are going into.

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