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A Chance To Become An Adonis
A Chance To Become An Adonis
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Laying in his own pool of blood, Lu Chen watches his wife being embraced by another man. He couldn’t believe it. If there is any way possible, Lu Chen wanted to tear them apart from each other, yet nothing. Lu Chen couldn’t do anything as he slowly dies. And the final words he will ever hear was,

“You will always be nothing but second place.” Then a bullet went through his chest.

Before Lu Chen had lost all consciousness, endless regret begins to flow through him. The people that cared for him he ignored, people that trusted him he betrayed. The only thing he had on his mind was; a second chance.

However, it is as if somebody had heard him plead. Lu Chen was sent back to his 18-year-old body. He didn't want to believe it, yet he had to. Lu Chen couldn't waste this opportunity. What will the young man do to change his future?

Hello guys. I will be posting 2 chapters every 2 days somewhere between 9:00-10:00 pm.

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ActionDramaHaremMartial ArtsRomanceSchool LifeSlice of Life
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      lehur
      Status: c28
      Nov 23, 2020

      I like second chance

      I like villain

      But not this one.

      1. He said his family blah.... Corporation and have butler. If you have money gave to gangster or what to beat long something (he afraid everyone suspect him - idiot as long as no one have a proof or he just ned to not go to school)

      2. This should be second chance, but the moron and mongrel the son of poor family MC was, he just endured being bully in school. If you rich and your family powerful why every mob bully you? Illogical. His family was poor villager not corporation sh*t. 

      3. This should be second chance, but until 48 chap he just did 2 things, cut his hair and study, so his father could saving money when he go to college. His family poor

      4. This should be second chance, yet he still pathetic where everyone bully him, villain speak with fist (of course others fist, asking soemone to beat his enemy)

      5. This should be second chance, again no revenge mode and no hating someone, just smile and acting like he and his murdered as stranger

      6. MC persona was sh*t licking dog, loser, coward, what he do is simple (absent from class stomachache from playing ps5 and give someone money to beat the enemy and throw him in river and still absent from school until 1 month and no one gonna ask you as long as no proof)

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      Harem-Fan
      Status: chapter 99: processing
      Jan 13, 2021

      OK the good the bad and the ugly!

      1 The good! It is well written, good grammar, and a good plot. I will continue to follow this great story!

      2 The bad! The MC is so smart and likable but he is a retard when it comes to girls.

      3 The ugly! Based on the MC and the tags the author has put up this is a fake harem.. I.E. dense protagonist that probably will star in the movie the 40 year old virgin... so do not expect him to have s*xy time!

      Despite ponts 2 and 3 I love this story!

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      Ouroboros
      Status: chapter 82: bloodthirsty beasts
      Dec 28, 2020

      Good premise, poorly implemented, short chapters with some less than a thousand words, little actual substance, poor pacing, unlikable MC with a beta personality, no use of future knowledge, and generally a bit boring since nothing is happening. It could be good if it was condensed,   pacing was done better, he grows a spine, but overall its annoying to read.

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      AvariciousFist
      Status: c166
      Feb 22, 2021

      Updated review: 

      •beta

      •dense

      •the story is everywhere

      •retarded characters

      •stupid MC that it feels like he was forever stucked as a kid on his past life

      •BETA

      Oh you mean revenge? On the bitch childhood friend and that long d*ck? Heh, wait a bit more years on it, maybe on 3040 we will finally see him confront those two idiots, oh I mean the three idiots will now fight

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      mcarandang2
      Status: chapter 30ish - kinda skimmed...
      Jan 8, 2021

      Reviewer / user TDM  says it quite well.

      This is a face slapping novel. I has the elements, of second chance / do-over / return to the past qualities. Coupled with the famous Chinese school interactions (both in JP and China) of a rich person. Honestly better than most of the actual Chinese one's, but... (I'm not going to mention it). I'm not surprised people find it boring, but grammar, pacing and story is good. This is really oriented towards a specific reader / niche. Author has some cool ideas though.

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      TDM
      Status: chapter 173
      Nov 22, 2020

      Reincarnation. Dense Protagonist. Slice of Life. ... Maybe revenge, someday in a hypothetical distant future (don't hold your breath).  I'm reviewing having also read the original draft.  UPDATE: I'm downgrading my review after 167 chapters and literally zero efforts towards revenge or preventing the murder of his entire family. Story pace is glacial; author on track to finish story in ~2279 AD.

      Story: A second-chance reincarnation story that promises future revenge elements as well as mystery/intrigue because of murdered family, and some love interest. Based on the opening chapters, where the protagonist, Lu Chen, is murdered (in his late 30s?) by his wife and her long-time lover.  But wait, this story is not primarily a revenge tale, it is slice of life.  So, cool your jets skippy, author wants to feed his nearly-40-year-old virgin protagonist slices of cake and throw yandre harems at him for a few hundred chapters, minimum, before any proactive action might be taken.

      Writing Style and Story: Story switches too often between preteen cherry boy slice of life, and attempting to be serious about other elements.  Motivations for character actions usually apparent, if twisted and bizarre by normal-person standards (characters are super elite wealthy, or martial arts monsters, or have mental issues that normal people wouldn't relate to or understand).  Author shows emotion and thoughts of his characters and might occasionally tell us what people think.

      Characters: The main character is not obviously overpowered, but he does have advantages, some of which are only hinted at thus far. He is/was imperfect; some would call him a loser and thuggish when he was a teen; personally I think he was born rich but had few redeeming physical or mental attributes, was obsessed with his fiancé and childhood friend (who learned to resent him), and was unhealthily antisocial... he was repeatedly baited by a certain villain's stooges into acting rashly and ruined his reputation and face.  And ultimately he is betrayed in the worst way, and killed, by someone he loved and trusted.  But 2nd chance reincarnation allows him an opportunity to fix his mistakes. Supporting characters fall into standard romance categories, and Lu Chen will do his best to ignore female relationships (because what guy would ever want to have s*x when he or his family might be killed in a few years... no, better to get extra sleep and run laps around the house), resulting in humorous painfully awkward situations. All support characters are well done, but not terribly developed thus far. Also, there are a couple characters, that readers will love to hate.  

      Grammar and Spelling: Decent and visibly improving.

      Recommendation: 3 stars. 4 stars 3 stars... a bit of recent progress re. the plot. Prepare yourself for lots of slice-of-life "fun".

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      vainu
      Status: chapter:135
      Feb 16, 2021

      As a second chance novel in a more standard urban world, I greatly enjoy it.

      some stuff I like about it:

      • The fact that the MC is pretty beta is put off for some but tbh It makes it 10 times better with how the novel follows.
      • the mc's density in most situations is actually understandable with what we know of his previous time line and his emotions state.
      • Character development is good and not much to critic about it as it is what I would expect from a good read.
      • Im also an avid yandere fan so id definitely give this 5 stars.

      i dont have much to comment on what can be improved asides from the fact that there is bit too much filler for my taste but provides a good background of what maybe to come.

      p.s. Please make the chapters longer if you can id rather have longer chapters instead of more of them...

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      CashewFarmer
      Status: chapter 13: hated name
      Nov 29, 2020

      The 2nd chance concept is ok but there are a couple of problems with the execution.

      1) Slight grammatical errors here and there, nothing too major

      2) The protagonist somehow never picked up that his wife never loved him despite all the obvious signs which is highly immersion-breaking.

      3) The story takes a while to start. At chapter 13 nothing really happens apart from people being surprised about the protagonist changing.

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      Kuren05
      Status: c34
      Nov 12, 2020

      So far the overall development is great between characters and the tone set. No grammatical errors from what I can see either. Only problem is the chapters are too short but the frequency of the updates makes up for it in a way. Lastly looking forward to how the romance is developed as there have been no hints towards any yet but from the pace it is looking promising.

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      Asterlanus
      Status: chapter 18: enough
      Oct 24, 2020

      Chapters are short but interesting. Didn't read the original so going to look forward to more.

      Interested in the Yandede tag and looking forward to how it will be implemented.

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