By acaswell
Alice is a girl who loves science and lives on Earth. Then, suddenly, she was punted into another dimension. A dimension where magic and monsters roam the land, and, for some reason, a System keeps dinging at her and telling her that her stats and
Not sure how, but I'm the first to review! This is my 1st review too.
Definitely one of those types of stories that'll get you reading in one sitting then feel empty when there's no more chapters.
Recommended!
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After having followed the story for a while on RoyalRoad, I was bummed to hear it was taken off. Luckily, I was able to continue where I left off on ScribbleHub. The story is first and foremost, amazing.
It brings a refreshing prospective to the concept of immortality. The title pretty much highlights that. At some points, the author does take too long to build up on advancement in the story, but the heights are interesting to read.
The world building is amazing. We've only yet seen a glimpse of it, and I can tell there's many more to come.
Cons: The author has inconsistencies in pronouns and some odd sentence structures. Not really hard to get over, but sometimes can be immersion-breaking.
Inconsistent release schedules. You may at some point find yourself waiting for a chapter well over 4 months.
Pros: Great story, Well-rounded characters, Amazing World Building, Vivid detailing.
All in all, a must-read 5/5!
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