It's so dry I am surprised. What I mean by that is there hardly any background definition and the dialogue between characters lacks life. Plus everything just seems so easy also the MC makes incorrect conclusions even though it looks obviously wrong

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Nice concept, but just a whole lot of 'and then' writing. I did this action and then I did this action, and then the enemy did this action. Or, I said this thing after thinking this thing and the other person said/did this thing. No depth to the writing, we can't even get a solid handle on the MC's thought process since we only see skin deep thoughts and actions. This makes the character and battle interactions seem disjointed and stiff, like a couple of action figures came alive and are fighting or talking to each other.

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- The MC is TOO OP, for example, the level of the enemy it does not mind, he can kill it without problems. I can crafta "simple weapon" with bones that can make anything and it is shared with my summons

- I feel like reading the log of a game...  There are chapters where almost all is: "Skill Evolution:..., Skill Evolution:..., Skill Evolution:..."

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