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I like, from the aspect of world building, to the personality of the characters and also the MC himself

Though I kinda wish author to bash the saint feeling much more and make her heart broken and give the MC harem, since the candidate is there after all, but hey it's all my wish

And also thank you for the novel author

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Overall a great story, so far there are some solid characters, interesting subversions of trope and ideas I have not seen in an isekai. 

However, some grammatical flaws (i.e. Verbiage and pronouns) does adversely impact the flow of the story as well as cliche/unoriginal plot devices (i.e. Foolish goddess, envy/lack of reasoning, minor plot holes). Although these tropes are ok to use, they often lack any reasoning behind it and are usually for a short term gag or for the convenience of the plot. The lack of character of some characters is frustrating as well, however, I am now nitpicking. In summation, this story has incredible potential and regardless of a possible harem, I am content with the direction of the story and mc/heroine. 

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A good fic, but it REALLY needs a beta reader, or a pass through Grammerly, or something. The errors break the flow and can ruin the mood when they pop up.

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I'd probably rate this 3-4 stars. The story is interesting and is overall written reasonably well, however there are quite a few parts which don't flow, which is detrimental to the story.

These include the mixing up of gender pronouns and the liberal use of odd names for minor characters create some confusion trying to piece the setting of the scene.

I would strongly recommend fixing the pronouns.

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This book is really good in general, and I really like how the characters are actually written with depth, unlike some that are just flat and 2D. Also, the plot and the emotions that are exhibited by the characters are great. Definitely give this book a try. Only thing to complain about is the author updates only once a week : (

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