Similarly, the setting provides just enough information and familiarity that the reader won't find themself lost in attempting to keep track of it all and plenty of mystery to be explored and solved.

The way the author has made use of esper powers is quite ingenious, it not only provides a powerful plot device, but it also avoids the "deus ex machina" pitfall that so many stories fall into.

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officepony

Status: cb1 — 11

Mar 23, 2019

Oh, mystery, or drama, got the tingles. This author is amazing, check their other works too for some great reads.

Grammar: 4.8/5 (Needs some proofing and editing to really shine)

Story: 4.5/5

Writing: 5/5

The grammar for this particular story needs some proofing, but none of the mistakes really affect wordflow. The story feels very original in this time where Sci-Fi is severely lacking. The writing of this author is impeccable as always. Mmmmm, Mystery and Drama mixed with Psionics. This is a hella great read that starts you off just as confused, if not more so, than the protagonist. You learn things as the story progresses, but never enough to get the full picture. It tantalizes you with little details that could be missed if you aren't paying attention, and it tells you that the world you're being sucked into is big, bad, and willing to have you as a snack if you don't watch yourself.

Overall, as with everything that this author has written, I recommend this to anyone who wants a great reading experience.

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