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Overlord Fanfic
Overlord Fanfic
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Synopsis

MC died, meet a god, agreed to be isekai'd in isekai to be isekai'd later on isekai where magic is real.

Makes sense right?

Now read it.

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* I'll be posting this on Royal Road.*

READ THE ADVANCE 30 CHAPTERS AT MY PATREON.

www.Patreon.com/Evrabonzz

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ActionAdultComedyFanfictionFantasyHaremIsekaiMartial ArtsRomance
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Overlord
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Adventurers Fantasy Creatures Fantasy World Hard-Working Protagonist Transported into Another World
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  1. Chapter 19Sep 26, 2021
  2. Chapter 18Sep 14, 2021
  3. Chapter 17Sep 10, 2021
  4. Chapter 16Sep 8, 2021
  5. Chapter 15Aug 31, 2021
  6. Chapter 14Aug 31, 2021
  7. Chapter 13Aug 31, 2021
  8. Chapter 12Aug 31, 2021
  9. Chapter 11Aug 31, 2021
  10. Chapter 10Aug 31, 2021
  11. Chapter 9Aug 31, 2021
  12. Chapter 8Aug 31, 2021
  13. Chapter 7Aug 31, 2021
  14. Chapter 6Aug 31, 2021
  15. Chapter5Aug 31, 2021
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      SunnyShim
      Status: --

      This review is mostly about the writing itself and not the story.

      The main problem is the grammar. It's never a good sign if the first few sentences already have multiple errors in them. There are sure to be a mistake or two very often, practically every sentence/paragraph. The errors themselves aren't anything too bad but it definitely makes it seem like the author's first language isn't English or they didn't read over their work even a single time with how many errors there are. There are also times when it feels like the author should have accentuated or added more words to allow the reader to understand a scene better. If you're able to ignore them then this is alright.

      Another peculiar thing is the point of view. It's usually third-person but sometimes it changes to the point of view of the author or third-person omniscient so the point of view changes takes out some of the immersion of the story.

      One good thing about the writing is that the author makes use of many different sentence lengths which helps keep the reader not bored. Not sure if this was on purpose though.

      The character isn't very interesting and definitely isn't written to be likable to the reader, though, the author probably did that on purpose.

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      Pretty good, enjoyed reading it so far and will most likely continue to do so.

      Among the things that I liked were the fights, the characters and dialogs. It didn't blow me away or anything, but it was fine. It also takes place in a universe I'm somewhat interested in (to the extent of having watched the anime) that probably comes into play. Individually, most chapters are good in my opinion.

      Then there's what frustrated me as a reader. Mostly the lack of 'things I actually know'. Take the first few chapters, mister MC gets a number of wishes. He mentionned some of the wishes he made but I don't feel like he mentionned them all, did the number matter ? Am I missing any, and if so will they be mentionned later ? I know some of the things he can do, some of the items he has, some of the abilities of his gear, but never all of them and it makes it a little hard to put things into perspective. Of course, walls of text describing every single one of those things probably wouldn't be that great and in the end I don't know how to feel about it. Is it this way by choice or did it end up this way because the author is stingy with information ? Am I simply too greedy ? Who knows...

      Now about something a little less abstract and subjective (maybe ?). Pacing.

      Since the 'Actual' story begins pretty far in time chronologically, things have to be pretty fast before that, since it's mostly about constructing the starting point further down the road. And it is. Don't really have any issues there, don't have to read 200 chapters before things start happening. There are somethings that feel a little awkward though. Like when a scene is interrupted by lengthy explanations or even flashbacks that either don't really bring much to the scene itself. Chapter 31 is a good example of that. I could have enjoyed it, if it actually came before chapter 29 and 30, but since I'm keeping what was going to happen immediately after in mind, I can't really be bothered about what happened 4 months ago. Then there's things like the transition from chapter 29 to 30 which destroys whatever momentum was built for half a chapter of comedy that doesn't really bring anything and feels misplaced.

      There's some smaller things like time skips such as '7 years after game lauch' which are harder to follow than 'X months or Y years later' as they force you to change your point of view. And I think both should be used in these cases since I assume the point is to show the progression towards the D-day.

      Well that should be enough, hope there's something helpful in this review and I'll be looking forward to the way you handle the changes in atmosphere and pacing when Overlord begins. I'll probably be able to enjoy it anyway.

      (4/5 for me)

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      BookTycoon
      Status: chapter 44

      The story is pretty good, instead of directly reincarnating in the new world of yggdrasil he plan to join before it all began as to personally make his own character.

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      its great, cant stop reading it, raizel is awesome

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      A bit rough but has potential

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      Amakingu
      Status: chapter 15

      Durring the first few chapters I wasnt to sure if I would like where the story was going,   but then it gets exciting. I was thinking why did he just transmigrate just to play igsdrasil the game. But then irealized he is makeing evrything from the ground up through the game. When the MC is training and starts to make his character it gets exciting makeing me wonder about the future and the things he will make for the new world. There are some errors but there not annoying enough to effect readibility. I cant wait to read more.

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      Mr.Goose
      Status: chapter 46

      The story itself is pretty interesting, but thr pacing could have been better. The problem I have is the grammar. Other than that, I have no problem with this story.

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      Kp2087
      Status: c11

      Very good for some but others won’t like it, the only REAL issue I have is grammar but I can usually gloss over it. Overall a good fun time

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