Much better than the absolute majority of stories here so far, and it's only on chapter 9. 

I didn't find any grammar faults and the MC so far is behaving like a human being, which is rarer than you would think on sites like this.

Also, it doesn't have harem so... Bonus star!

A well done first draft!

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Female lead✔️

No harem ✔️

Not gender bender✔️

Interesting ✔️ 

Give this book a read it’s nice 

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It is an absolutely amazing story, that makes you sympathize with her and her struggles. I don't believe it will be coming back. Sorry I can't give full stars to a dead story. 

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I found this story last night and lost a lot of sleep reading it. To any potential readers, it is definitely worth your time. This is a fantastic tale.

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A really exciting and well written story with mystery and adventure! Moar!

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The story is great so far! I read up to Ch.21. The plot happens at a perfect pace, with pretty nice english to make reading experience great.

Elania is a very humane character, she suffers and learns and grows from her experience. It doesn’t have a very Monster-protagonist feel yet, but the story is doing perfectly fine. The status windows are maybe not structured enough, but that hardly hampers readers. The fantasy elements are good, detailed but obscure enough to tease and come back for more!

It is slightly lacking on internal monologue for character development for now, but is very well profiled anyway. Also, status levels are maybe a tad inflated, but that might very well be for author’s purposes, so we’ll have to wait and see.

I can’t wait to read more of Elania’s adventure!

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A rather good read.

The story itself is rather light most of the time with the dark parts usually coming from human interaction. The general feel and tone sways between 'It's not such a bad place' to 'f**k people, f**k organizations, and f**k everything in general, but f**k this one specific person for being the biggest piece of human scum in the history of everything' in my personal opinion.

The writing is fairly well executed with only minor issues when it comes to a couple of colloquialisms. Word flow is smooth, grammar is nice and tight, and the general worldbuilding while lacking in depth thus far is enough to get a feel for a few places.

Overall, a nice read I would recommend.

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