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Beneath the Dragoneye Moons
Beneath the Dragoneye Moons
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Elaine is ripped from this world to Pallos, a land of unlimited possibilities made real by a grand System governing classes, skills, and magic.

An ideal society? What is this, a fantasy novel?

Adventures? Right this way!

A Grand quest? Nah.

Friends and loot? Heck yes!

Humans are the top dog? Nope, dinosaur food.

Healing and fighting? Well, everything is trying to eat her.

Join Elaine as she travels around Pallos, discovering all the wonders and mysteries of the world, trying to find a place where she belongs, hunting those elusive mangos, all while the ominous Dragoneye Moons watch her every move.

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Hey! Beneath the Dragoneye Moons is my first writing effort, so please be kind, but don’t hesitate to point out the flaws.

The story starts off slowly, more like a slice of life than action-adventure, but it gets there!

I’m going to be posting M-W-F at first, but I hope to increase the posting rate as I get better at this.

I do know how the story ends, and I promise if it ever gets dropped, or I stop doing this, I will post the ending. There will be no random “this is the last chapter” out of the blue.

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Cover art by Lee Kent: https://www.artstation.com/leekent
High-res cover image: https://imgur.com/a/7MDQQC6
This story is being published on Royal Road and Scribblehub.

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      Milanda
      Status: chapter 44 –virinum ii
      Nov 5, 2020

      I am strongly suggesting this story for many reasons, the main one being a strong but kind hearted MC who isn’t a pushover nor a bully. Life is shades of grey with ups and downs and I feel the author does a really good job at showing that. 

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      Holder-of-the-metal-bat
      Status: chapter 83
      Nov 1, 2020

      [Initial review, chapter 35]

      For me, this is the story of a girl finding herself in this new world, full of warm and fuzzy feelings, but not without its dangers.

      It is very light-hearted and very serious at the same time. Definitely an interesting writing style. Story builds up nicely and there is already quite a lot of content in these first 30ish chapters.

      [Edit, chapter 83]

      I'm bad at not spoiling the story, so all I can say is that I still enjoy this story a lot. If you liked the start, chances are you'll like the rest.

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      Kodari
      Status: chapter 85– plague xv
      Jan 8, 2021

      Actual score would be somewhere around 4.4, I'll leave it at 5 just because I do think it deserves some praise.
      Some minor spoilers ahead
      This story is about a girl who dies on Earth and gets reincarnated to a world with a litrpg system, she doesn't get any major benefits from her status and no cheat items, even some knowledge about modern tech is taken from her to prevent unbalancing the world.
      Pros:
      -Great litrpg system with interesting classes and skills and abilities, Similar to Azarinth healer. (Without the op MC)
      -Good worldbuilding, although there's a small issue I'll mention later.
      -Side characters are pretty good.
      -Grammar and dialogues are great.
      -Refreshing plot direction, no grand quest or some cliché plot points

      Cons-
      The MC's personality doesn't really fit someone who's been reincarnated, she often makes decisions that seem quite baffling  considering her real age, it also seems she's somehow regressed mentality to fit her physical age. 
      There are some cases where heavy plot armor saves her from her stupidly. 
      I do have to state that the MC is slowly improving and learning, although there are some things that she won't be able to fix which is annoying and interesting at the same time because the MC has to learn to adapt to certain choices that she made. That's pretty much the only thing I didn't like about it.
      Just a minor annoyance of mine but for some reason there's some heavy s*xism, in a world where the presence of a system eliminates any gap between men and women, there are certain places where females are literally second class citizens and it's widely accepted as the norm, the author does explain in to a certain extent but I don't think it really works, it just seems like he/she placed it there as another wrong our MC has to fight against. 
      Just to clarify, the author doesn't make the MC or any other  female character a Mary Sue, they all have their vices and feel  pretty real.

      After all of this I do suggest you give it a try, the author is clearly improving and I have no doubt this will go from great to fantastic 

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