Magitech is booming, and it all started when mysterious robots showed up one day and offered to create tools to utilize the magic in the air.
The efficiency was bad, and improvements were slow.
Aumo, an orphaned boy, figured out how to overcome the efficiency problems. He was sought after, but died when some of the robots stopped working with the humans.
Aumo then wakes up a hundred years later, with the robots and humans divided into factions. What will he do?
This is the first story that I will properly writing. As someone who quite literally failed in English Class before, I'm not expecting it to be good myself(all they teach us how to write essays though). That aside, hope you enjoy this story; give me ideas or tell me what I could improve on. Currently on Hiatus due to College. I tried to make time, but the homeworks are brutal.
I don't feel anything in this history, I liked the settings, but it's that... Our protagonist don't seems to have any objective, the author as well introduced two Points that to me is bad, adventurer guild And dungeons, After too many history like that, stories that the protagonist just run everywhere doing missions or killings monster in the same dungeon floor by floor, just feel empty, the history don't show us anything to we expect as result of his actions.
That said I liked the settings and characters
--edit (2/11/21)
I feel bad to see how after my review the author didn't more updates... Personally I like to do bad reviews to the author think a second time what he will do in his history, not to lose the hype to write... That's sad, I really liked the characters of this history after all...
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