It's a interesting fan-fiction. The main protagonist is a assassin and often throughout the story I feel that his character changes and sometimes he goes out of character (Though, it's probably hard to convey his personality with the grammar issues.).
The plot of the story is simple and just follows the regular plot of AoT without any significant changes up until chapter 34 where the story starts to differ from AoT.
I feel that this can be done better and It's being dragged down by the horrendous grammar issues in these chapters. (Seriously, it's like reading MTL or some book a child wrote in kindergarten, don't read it if you can't handle it.)
It's a interesting fan-fiction. The main protagonist is a assassin and often throughout the story I feel that his character changes and sometimes he goes out of character (Though, it's probably hard to convey his personality with the grammar issues.).
The plot of the story is simple and just follows the regular plot of AoT without any significant changes up until chapter 34 where the story starts to differ from AoT.
I feel that this can be done better and It's being dragged down by the horrendous grammar issues in these chapters. (Seriously, it's like reading MTL or some book a child wrote in kindergarten, don't read it if you can't handle it.)
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grammar needs work but the story flow is great so far.
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