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Chapter 60 The PopeJan 10, 2021
Chapter 59 HistoriaJan 10, 2021
Chapter 58 AftermathJan 10, 2021
Chapter 57 Battle at Stohess (5)Jan 10, 2021
Chapter 56 Battle at Stohess *Merry Christmas*Dec 25, 2020
Chapter 55 Battle at Stohess (3)Dec 23, 2020
Chapter 54 Battle at Stohess (2)Dec 22, 2020
Chapter 53 Battle at Stohess (1)Dec 21, 2020
Chapter 52 New PistolDec 20, 2020
Chapter 51 Strange DreamDec 19, 2020
Chapter 60 Carly Stratman’s Gift (4)Dec 19, 2020
Chapter 49 Carly Stratman’s Gift (3)Dec 17, 2020
Chapter 48 Carly Stratman’s Gift (2)Dec 16, 2020
Chapter 47 Carly Stratman’s GiftDec 15, 2020
Chapter 46 BlueprintDec 14, 2020

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Lunarium

Status: c42

Dec 2, 2020

It's a interesting fan-fiction. The main protagonist is a assassin and often throughout the story I feel that his character changes and sometimes he goes out of character (Though, it's probably hard to convey his personality with the grammar issues.).

The plot of the story is simple and just follows the regular plot of AoT without any significant changes up until chapter 34 where the story starts to differ from AoT.

I feel that this can be done better and It's being dragged down by the horrendous grammar issues in these chapters. (Seriously, it's like reading MTL or some book a child wrote in kindergarten, don't read it if you can't handle it.)

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