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From what I’ve seen so far, the story itself is fun and interesting and always leaves me wanting more.
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I'm quite disappointed on this novel. Let me tell you why:
First, The MC is a chatterbox. Spouting whatever info's he have he even let a native to read his database including his top-secret mission logs.
Don't the federation supposed to have countermeasures against this like forcefully self-destructing itself?Or are they just idiots?
Second, MC got conquered by a native with her sheer strength. Don't rebuke on me like it's because he has lost most of his modules or whatnot.
At least give him psionic or energy shield to defend against unkown energies.
He is a "Conqueror" afterall. An important asset to the federation.
Third, The MC got easily flustered.
Truthfully, I expected a calculative and emotionless AI. Although he is a 'Saipient AI' which I assumed a variant of AI with human emotions. That doesn't mean he can just be flustered when a variable appeared at least he must have a protocol when this appeared before him.
Anyway, This review is based on few first chapters of the novel so I may not know if MC improved his character or not but I'm dropping this
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I like the story. Love it even. The characters all feel human, and the humor is pretty good as well. Some of the action is a bit hard to follow, but better than most cultivation novels. Only real issue I have with the writing itself is the info dumps, but they’re more of a mild annoyance than anything. But man... that upload frequency is barren to put it lightly. I understand that the authors been having issues, being in the health field during covid and everything. If the uploads become a little more frequent, this book would easily be a five star. 37 chapters in two years? I wish I could get away with that schedule!
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This novel had a lot of promise, unfortunately it fell flat for me. The first and most subjective issues is the comedy. I was expecting a serious novel with a comedic flair, maybe some jokes about the standard cultivation tropes, instead we got a slap stick comedy with some semi serous moments. As the comedy largely fell flat for me, it was not an enjoyable read. As comedy is entirely subjective your mileage may vary when enjoying this aspect.
The next major issue here is the MC. He is written more as a very flawed, but intelligent human instead of a "sapient AI." The character back story and motivations are very inconsistent with his actions. Arc makes tons of mistakes and takes very illogical and nonsensical actions for a supposedly Ai solider that is the best in a galaxy spanning multi-racial federation with an uncountable number of citizens. It becomes painfully apparent the inconsistencies in his character or actions are largely there for comedic relief which kills the novel for me.
The next issue is filler chapters, whole chapters of comedic nonsense backstory for the MC or multiple chapters describing the same event just from different perspectives. This is not done well as the plot progression and pacing suffer heavily from these two issues.
The largest issue with this novel and the majority of other novels by this author is he has taken his most popular novels and put them up on Pateron under a paywall and basically stopped updating them on free sites.
I would not reccomend this novel to anyone as even the re-write of this novel just exaerbates these issues.
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