I expected to see drama, feeling, minimally realistic relationships and maybe a little love.

 However this is a story about a virgin MC who likes to see his girlfriend having s*x with other people while he watches it. 

The rest of the plot is a tangled mess that doesn't really make much sense. The author repeatedly tries to describe a loving relationship between the characters. But the actions of the characters and the unspoken directions of the narrative do not demonstrate this.

 For some people with certain types of fetish this may work, but overall reading this was a very frustrating experience for me.

 How do you watch a bad movie to the end just to know how it ends.

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This novel is something. It was a rough one to start, but once I got through the first couple of chapters, it seemed like there was a lot this story could do, but It seems like I was wrong. This isn't a wish fulfillment or a jack-off novel, I didn't want it to be, and it still isn't. There are just far too many undeveloped shifts in the novel that serve only to produce conflict. Characters behave one way for 30 chapters then they are basically a different character with the same name in the next. Characters make major, major decisions that they never would have made. And many major characters only devolve. I thought the author was open minded at first, but now I can see that they are running headfirst into the sea of illusory normalcy that so many people desire. The people who clicked away from this novel at the beginning are the ones who would ultimately enjoy it the most.

5 stars for quality and effort, 0 stars for substance, which is honestly the thing that matters for me.

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This is story for sharing and NTR fetish but the Smuth part not good enough for fap material so this story only torment your hearth and PP, still I appreciate your writing skill and maybe next time write more detailed smuth 

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Reading this series is like getting your hand caught in a blender and the only way to save yourself is to cut off your fingers. I thought this was related to a different web novel and stumbled here. 

This started off rough but I thought it would get more positive but, sadly, it doesn't. The recent 30 or so chapters have been especially just off for some reason. It almost feels like the author switched and the characters have just utterly deviated.  

If you have any form of normalcy or values you will find this especially hard to stomach and you may very well suffer.  If you can't stop once you start something you have been warned. 

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You need a strong heart and mind to read this novel it's very good but if you have a weak will it will be very hard for you to read other as some people say it's the bomb

-shotgun

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This novel is a really nice read if you want something interesting. I really like the characters here, sometime is too much for me but Overall its really great

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TL;DR Beta bitch Cuck with a portly done NTR fetish the characters just devolve more and more as it goes on there’s no substance or consistency at all and again the MC is gets cucked constantly the author tries to make it a “loving” relationship but it’s utter garbage no just no

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All you need to know is that this is a cuck novel. Netorare goes on until the end of the story, the author loves to make excuses for infidelities, and the MC is an idiot who would take his women back no matter what they do 

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The story is good as someone who likes NTR but not to the point where you want to read your MC watch his GF to f**k around with other men. 

Though I don't hate the story, I dislike the MC with his stupid brain. I thought this was something Wish fulfillment or Netori— but I was mistaken for thinking this Story will be interesting. 

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Alright, so I'm writing this review after already having reviewed the successor to this story and am going to repeat a few things from that review. Originally, I would of rated this story 5 stars, but after reading the successor and having time to think about it... even though I still quite enjoy the story...I don't think giving 5 stars is fair.

I found this story about a month ago. It is in fact, the first-original web novel I've read, and it captured my attention almost immediately. Only taking me about 2 days to get through all of the chapters, except for a few of the non-canon/after dark stories. I found each of the characters quite interesting and every time the tension grew; it compelled me to continue reading. However, there was a major issue I noticed about halfway through my initial reading.

The readers, hurt the story. You could easily tell that at a certain point, the author was writing more for the fans, rather than writing what they wanted. Which, kind of hurt the story in a way. Of course, it was still good, but it was no longer at the level it could of been. However, I'd still recommend reading this version and then reading it's successor.

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