The story takes place in the same world as Althea that is the author's current greatest story, it takes a bit of the aspects of Althea but mixes it up to a point where it doesn't matter that much whether you have read the story or not.

The grammar is fine to say the least, typos there and there but none of us are perfect anyway (and taking consideration that these authors have no editors).

The story is where I find it a little bit the same as what happened to Althea, it starts off to say a little bit bad but it could be a quirk of the author but after some time, the story got a bit better though I won't really describe which part got better since it is still too early.

I have to admit, the story has plenty of emotional parts for example the death of the heroine and so forth and I admire those chapters to be truthful.

Then again, this is all my opinion, this may change in the far future.