it was a little good at first seeing MC is now path to getting stronger then it gets confusing one moment MC is getting praise and awed and the next moment MC is just trash meh without any reason charchters just flip what the heck every charchter have a biploar disorder or something.

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The story concept is good but style is bad paragraphs are too damn long and it spells boring........

The story is confusing at some part he is killing a monter that needs a group of members to kill (as said by the bystanders) and later same bystanders are saying he is a weak arse mage.  Somewhat at begining he is showing off his magic skills and is evaluated high and later they say he is weak author what the f**k....

Also during the journey Princess evaluates him potential character to defy logic and later she is rude towards him like he is nothing but a sh*t......

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I dropped this series because its too hard to read. Dialogues are rly confusing and all of them are written in the same line.

My suggestion would be to write who said what, after the text.

Instead of doing

MC said. "text MC said". char2 said. "text char2 said".

Formating it so its readable and with line breaks in-between speakers.

"text MC said" MC said.

"text char2 said" char2 said.

The MC is overpowered and thats not a bad thing, but the fights are laughable and the MC is not using his skills. Like when he was fighting a mercernary and the dude cut off his legs and hands but the MC didn't even fight back. Keep in mind the MC has a short range blink and he never used it in this fight... 

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I would read this story if it were not for the huge paragraphs. but both the first and already 160 chapters are filled with huge walls of text that are impossible to read. 

Because of them, I can't even form a clearer opinion about the story. But what I have read so far suggests that the story is not outstanding, but you can read it.... Except I can't read it.

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