This is the main character's abilities and information at the beginning of the story.
Claire Hill
[Name: Claire Hill
Race: Ice Fairy
Strength: C
Speed: A
Mana: A
Skills: Ice Shift (Rising), Fairy Eyes (U), Glacial World (OverLord)
Overall: A+]
[Ice Fairy: As an Ice Fairy, you are immune to both the water and ice element. Furthermore, as long as you touch either of the two, you may consume them to heal your physical wounds.]
[Fairy Eyes: With the eyes of a fairy, you can see the Sacred Text of another.]
[Ice Shift: As an Ice fairy, you can transform into your second form, or partially do so, gaining new abilities.
<Glaze> - Able to summon and control ice to your whim. You can also touch anything to simply freeze it. Finally, you may freeze an object and make it disappear into your <Glacial World> and may call it back at any time. Power over the strength of your Ice element is based on your mana rank.
——> <Glacial World> A world of unending snow, a land in which you are the master of and may enter and leave at will. You may pull another into this realm as long as you are able to cover them in your mana. Within this space, all stats are increased by 1 major rank and you can summon and control all ice within with no cost to your mana.
<Switch> - With this ability, you may switch locations with any piece of ice that has been summoned or made previously.]
Weapon: [Loki: A relic of the past, a weapon forged from Eternal Ice. Not only can it cut through iron like butter, whatever liquid its blade touches will freeze.
The bandages around its handle are made from a single feather of an archangel, allowing the user not only a firm grip but also the ability to control them.
A weapon holding a will of its own but bending to the whim of a worthy master.]
'Mentor': Igris Neihime
This is the second main-character's abilities and information.
Alicia Fraught
[Name: Alicia Fraught
Race: Ancient Vampire
Strength: A
Speed: A
Mana: A
Skills: Eyes of Death (U), Blood Magic (U), Ancient Healing Arts (U), Bat Transformation (U)
Overall: S-]
[Ancient Vampire: The first and legendary race of vampires. Having the ability to control their own blood to do whatever they wish and an Immortal body that refuses to age or die. They were once feared as the rulers of death, so much so that the highest tier of royalty within their race possessed the Eyes of Death—a skill that allowed them to, when meeting eye contact, force an opponent to experience their own death-greatly lowering the foes might and willpower to fight.
<Bat Transformation> Able to transform, partially or impartially, into a bat whose size you can change.
<Claws> Your nails can be elongated and sharpened to the strength of iron.]
[Blood Magic: A magic specific to the race of Ancient Vampires. It allows its user to control their own blood in order to make miracles. However, only three options are currently available.
One—Able to shape and harden your blood to make various items with.
Two—Able to store items into a pocket dimension within your veins.
Three—Able to explode your blood. Explosion based on both the mana poured in and the quantity of blood.]
[Mask of the Ancient One: Magnifies <Eyes of Death>, allowing the owner to capture multiple individuals into the skill as long as even one person around the area stares into your eyes.]
[Clothes of the Abyss: Grants the wielder an immunity to all natural elements and transforms with the user.]
[God's Lock: An ancient relic used to seal both power and memories, used on beings deemed a threat to the world itself.]
I'm so sad, this had such an interesting premise, but it's built on inconsistencies, contradictions, and obvious plot holes. I can only comment on content up to chapter 5 so I don't think anything I'm about to say deserves hiding in a spoiler tag, but I'll do it anyway just in case.
tl;dr - don't waste your time if you enjoy anything that makes sense or prefer authors who can remember what they wrote 2 paragraphs ago ¯\_ (ツ) _/¯
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Sadly the logical inconsistencies bog down something that was somewhat promising. I suggest the tone of the novel doesn't drastically change every few chapters. Otherwise, not too bad.
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