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Ice Queen in Another World – Volume 1 [Completed]
Ice Queen in Another World – Volume 1 [Completed]
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Claire Hill (beginning)

This is the main character's abilities and information at the beginning of the story.

Claire Hill

[Name: Claire Hill

Race: Ice Fairy

Strength: C

Speed: A

Mana: A

Skills: Ice Shift (Rising), Fairy Eyes (U), Glacial World (OverLord)

Overall: A+]

[Ice Fairy: As an Ice Fairy, you are immune to both the water and ice element. Furthermore, as long as you touch either of the two, you may consume them to heal your physical wounds.]

[Fairy Eyes: With the eyes of a fairy, you can see the Sacred Text of another.]

[Ice Shift: As an Ice fairy, you can transform into your second form, or partially do so, gaining new abilities.

<Glaze> - Able to summon and control ice to your whim. You can also touch anything to simply freeze it. Finally, you may freeze an object and make it disappear into your <Glacial World> and may call it back at any time. Power over the strength of your Ice element is based on your mana rank.

——> <Glacial World> A world of unending snow, a land in which you are the master of and may enter and leave at will. You may pull another into this realm as long as you are able to cover them in your mana. Within this space, all stats are increased by 1 major rank and you can summon and control all ice within with no cost to your mana.

<Switch> - With this ability, you may switch locations with any piece of ice that has been summoned or made previously.]

Weapon: [Loki: A relic of the past, a weapon forged from Eternal Ice. Not only can it cut through iron like butter, whatever liquid its blade touches will freeze.

The bandages around its handle are made from a single feather of an archangel, allowing the user not only a firm grip but also the ability to control them.

A weapon holding a will of its own but bending to the whim of a worthy master.]



'Mentor': Igris Neihime

Alicia Fraught (beginning)

This is the second main-character's abilities and information.

Alicia Fraught

[Name: Alicia Fraught

Race: Ancient Vampire

Strength: A

Speed: A

Mana: A

Skills: Eyes of Death (U), Blood Magic (U), Ancient Healing Arts (U), Bat Transformation (U)

Overall: S-]

[Ancient Vampire: The first and legendary race of vampires. Having the ability to control their own blood to do whatever they wish and an Immortal body that refuses to age or die. They were once feared as the rulers of death, so much so that the highest tier of royalty within their race possessed the Eyes of Death—a skill that allowed them to, when meeting eye contact, force an opponent to experience their own death-greatly lowering the foes might and willpower to fight.

<Bat Transformation> Able to transform, partially or impartially, into a bat whose size you can change.

<Claws> Your nails can be elongated and sharpened to the strength of iron.]

[Blood Magic: A magic specific to the race of Ancient Vampires. It allows its user to control their own blood in order to make miracles. However, only three options are currently available.

One—Able to shape and harden your blood to make various items with.

Two—Able to store items into a pocket dimension within your veins.

Three—Able to explode your blood. Explosion based on both the mana poured in and the quantity of blood.]

[Mask of the Ancient One: Magnifies <Eyes of Death>, allowing the owner to capture multiple individuals into the skill as long as even one person around the area stares into your eyes.]

[Clothes of the Abyss: Grants the wielder an immunity to all natural elements and transforms with the user.]



[God's Lock: An ancient relic used to seal both power and memories, used on beings deemed a threat to the world itself.]

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    Ultrabenosaurus
    Status: [5] frozen island

    I'm so sad, this had such an interesting premise, but it's built on inconsistencies, contradictions, and obvious plot holes. I can only comment on content up to chapter 5 so I don't think anything I'm about to say deserves hiding in a spoiler tag, but I'll do it anyway just in case.

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    1. Michael, first seat of the Archangels serving God, is introduced to us by impersonating and mocking God. I'm not religious but that seems beyond dumb. It seems more likely to be some sort of demon or devil tricking her, or perhaps some other deity lying and taking advantage of Christian mythos to manipulate a believer? Yet Claire doesn't seem suspicious at all and totally goes along with it.
    2. We know nothing about Claire yet, so her admitting defeat in their "battle of words" when "Michael" says "your God" feels like a massive oversimplification and cheat. She had so many more options to try and argue her way out of essentially being kidnapped and murdered by a creature who may not even be a real angel and could just be scamming her (see point 1).
    3. Why were her parents being entertained by God instead of Claire, the one who God is forcefully kidnapping to send to another world all of a sudden? Why did God not explain to her parents what was happening, as they seemed totally clueless? Why did Claire not explain what was happening to her parents? Sure, she's an "ice queen", but what little interaction we saw with her parents heavily implied they care for her a lot, so just saying "bye lol" is too exaggerated.
    4. Why did she not ask a single thing about the world she was going to, or what she was supposed to do there? Apparently God had chosen her for something and couldn't even wait to snatch her soul when she died, if we're to believe "Michael" that she didn't die and go to the afterlife. If she's going to agree anyway, surely she should at least know what she has just agreed to if she is to have any chance at completing her mission?
    5. "Michael", supposedly God's right-hand man and trusted to summon, convince, and transport Claire to the other world on God's behalf, did not try to explain the mission that God has given her.
    6. "Michael" specifically states that reincarnation involves being born as a new lifeform native to the other world while transmigration means being sent with her current body. She doesn't explicitly state her choice, so I can't know for sure which she chose, but I do know she appears in the other world with her current body and is even still wearing her school uniform... but she is also an Ice Fairy now, for some reason, with all the bells and whistles of being a native creature. Wut? Was "both" secretly an option?
    7. Her status, that she views almost immediately upon arriving in the other world, specifically states she is immune to the ice element. Her first injury? A shard of her own conjured ice cutting her cheek when an enemy smashes through the ice wall she made. Wut?
    8. A giant snake monster which is clearly attuned to water and ice fires a "laser" blast at Claire which is described by the author as an "icy" laser and Claire feels the cold closing in as it approaches her, yet, again, she is deathly afraid of this ice element attack she should be immune to, and in the comments the author stated it wasn't an ice attack but a normal laser. Why is a normal laser absorbing heat, instead of imparting heat? Why is a laser moving slow enough for Claire to feel leaking energy (cold radiation? it's magic) precede the attack? Why is the water and ice monster using an attack which is, in essence, a high-energy focused light beam instead of anything related to water or ice?
    9. I get that she's suddenly in over her head, but she's only just read her status about 5 minutes ago, and she has a skill that literally overwrites the world around her with a magical domain of ice inside which she is so OP the system itself describes her skills as "broken", and yet she doesn't use it against the giant snake shooting her with the cold-but-not-ice slower-than-light laser beams?

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    tl;dr - don't waste your time if you enjoy anything that makes sense or prefer authors who can remember what they wrote 2 paragraphs ago ¯\_ (ツ) _/¯

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    Sadly the logical inconsistencies bog down something that was somewhat promising. I suggest the tone of the novel doesn't drastically change every few chapters. Otherwise, not too bad.

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