Another Title: The Bored Former Goddess.
A lone girl sits comfortably on empty air while reading a book in the deep dark abyss. Suddenly a bright magic circle appears under her. Apparently, she gets caught in the hero summoning ritual.
Generic cliche indeed, the demon king rose again and wanted to rule over the world. The empire so decided to borrow the power of god and do the hero summoning ritual with the ancient magic that was passed down through many generations. They successfully summon heroes from another world. But unbeknown to them (There is one impostor.. ahem), they release the former goddess from her sealing place. A goddess that once destroys the countless world on a whim.
This is a story about a bored girl who has lived a boring life since the beginning of her existence.
What would you do if you were bored?
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Additional Note:I will be posting this story on RoyalRoad.com
This story is incomprehensible gibberish.
With English not being my first language and also being bad at grammar in general it makes it so that I can really understand bad grammar and empathize with it. This story however pushed me off the edge. Honestly, I should have seen the red flags when I saw a few grammar mistakes in the synopsis.
The grammar in this story is bad, like REALLY bad. This story's grammar is worse than any Chinese machine translations I ever read. I would honestly recommend the author get some form of application or extension that helps them write in English better. It doesn't even need to be a good one because ANYTHING is better than this.
The story is good though it's just severely hindered by the grammar and typos. The pacing is kinda an issue but it's better than most stuff on this website. The lore and worldbuilding are honestly really f**king good and I would recommend the novel purely on that alone if it weren't for the borderline heresy that is this story's grammar.
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Quite interesting start and lore, but pacing left much to be desired.
The lore and how author depicted the world is really roped me in. I like how the so called "gods" and universe works. Then the kingdoms and demons state are like a breath of fresh new air to me, although a little too naive (?) but I give it a big YES.
Now for the pacing (this maybe a little biased but I mean no offense with this). You got prologue, then a little world building before starting new chapter with another POV to see how weird situation was, the problem is in the next chapter, instead taking a little time to let reader absorb what was provided, BAM! Surprise! Another lore was added, then another whole new important character and immediately unmask the disguise by telling too much detail.
My personal problem is, why bother to disguised if only to exposed it immediately? Just be open from the start (summoning ceremony). Also with divinity overflow from her, I'm sure the gods must be already noticed her by then, unless the "gods" also had part in making many demigod so they couldn't detect her.
For grammar I give this an OK as long as I can read it without any discomfort. As I know how bad my grammar is even with Grammarly's help.
For me personally, it's definitely above average but left much to be desired. To be fair it's only has 5 chapter so far so, I will update later in the future (maybe).
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