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It's a rough start. At first, you can tell that the writer is trying to find their footing, with a little too much smut back to back, not enough fighting pallet cleanser, and the progression wasn't described well at first, but right around when he gets his second party member for adventuring the quality of the writing noticeably improved.
That all sort of balanced out. It helps that the writer is listening to feedback, making corrections, and is still writing. I have little doubt a lot of these ratings are pretty unfair. I would say that overall this is easily a 4.5 smut story.
For instance, some accused him of White Knighting in the beginning because he bought and freed a slave girl. Apparently, some people think it is a negative to free slaves. The only true criticism for that section of the story was that it indeed was rushed, but their criticism is dumb. It makes sense for a young virgin to think with his second head at first. 😆
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Ok so for anyone who wants to know it's literally your typical Isekai and I mean that literally, He's Wakes up in Body of a super pretty boy with amazing skills check, He's treated badly by family check, He has a White Knight Syndrome check, he buys a slave girl while talking about hating slavery even though he knows nothing about it except what he reads in other life oh bohooo slavery is wrong when most humans are corporate slaves soooo. But that's about it really it's your typical harem Isekai trope.
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The story is great. The smut is good (even if a bit much) and the plot is interesting. The Author is also as far as I can see updating every day (which is amazing) and is regulary editing out typos in the chapters. All in all I can only recommend this story.
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I rate this 4 stars site doesn't want to exept it
I find this an enjoyable read that hits a couple niches. There is enough of a balance between fun time and plot fore me to enjoy.
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A really good story that as of chapter 45 seems to have been abandoned.
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Great story that surprisingly, despite the author's own proclamation that it's basically just meant to be smut and wish-fulfillment, actually does an excellent job of pacing, worldbuilding, and introducing and developing the characters.
My one complaint would be that the porn scenes sometimes apparently contain bits of important story development, so if you're the sort of person that skips over those you might be mildly confused from time to time. But it's only really happened once so far, so even then it's really not a big deal. Still a 5/5 in my eyes, given how well the story does romance and everything else.
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Absolutely enjoyable~Wish-fulfillment, decent writing, cute and devoted lovers, zero cockblocking. There is literally nothing more I can ask for.
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Not bad, doesn't have many things to set it apart from other of its genre. The smut is excellent, so there is that.
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The good is that writer seems to care about their story and listens to corrections and feedback. Sadly though...
It's alright mediocre nothing special. Is not bad not good. Sadly that's the problem there is nothing special about the story.
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