Name: Hiroki Hart
Race: Ghost
Appearance:
White hair, red normal eyes. He wears plain, ripped clothes that are only partially visible, with a pale white face. His body appears transparent, giving him an ethereal presence.
Hiroki has a white shirt, dark jeans, and a dark cloak, giving him a more refined and mysterious appearance.
Age: 17 when he died.
Height: 173 cm
Weight: 60 kg
Hair Color: Black in his human form, white in his ghost form
Eye Color: Gray in his human form, red in his ghost form
Personality:
Hiroki was known as one of the best students in the entire school, earning him a reputation that instills fear in others. Despite his academic achievements, he remains calm and rarely shows any emotional reactions.
In order to protect himself, Hiroki has developed a fake personality. He presents himself as someone who is solely focused on personal gain and achieving his own ambitions, keeping others at a distance. He appears cold and indifferent to the well-being of others, prioritizing his own victories above all else.
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Name: Aya
Race: Human
Age: 15 years old
Height: 140 cm
Weight: 39 kg
Personality: Aya is a kind-hearted and loving girl who tragically became an orphan due to a past incident involving her parents. She has a natural inclination to help others, although her traumatic experiences and lack of social skills have made her unsociable. Despite this, she remains determined to work hard and assist those in need. But that kindness was soon abused, turning her into nothing more than a human bait.
Over time, Aya gradually gains a bit more confidence, especially after finding support and companionship with Hiroki, who has been by her side throughout her struggles. She looks up to Hiroki and trusts his guidance, willingly following his lead. Even when Hiroki's actions become questionable, she remains blindly loyal due to her admiration for him.
Strengths: Aya's greatest strengths lie in her swiftness and agility, which allow her to navigate through challenging situations with ease. She possesses a kind and compassionate heart, always seeking to aid those in distress.
Weaknesses: Aya's traumatic past and lack of social skills hinder her ability to interact and connect with others. She can be overly reliant on Hiroki's decisions, making her vulnerable to manipulation. Additionally, her blind loyalty to Hiroki may cloud her judgment and prevent her from questioning his actions.
Likes: Helping others, acts of kindness, finding solace in solitude
Dislikes: Cruelty, injustice, feeling helpless
Backstory: Aya's backstory revolves around a tragic incident that resulted in the loss of her parents, leaving her as an orphan. She was left homeless, forced to survive on her own in a harsh and unforgiving world. Despite the hardships she endured, Aya's innate kindness and desire to assist others remained intact. Her encounter with Hiroki changed her life, as he became her sole source of support and guidance. As they journey together, Aya's past and the mysteries surrounding her parents' demise gradually unfold, shaping her character and their shared destiny.
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Funny right now, there are a few plotholes like the sudden attraction of both MC but nothing you can't fill with more story.
Their relationship is also interesting but I don't want to know the girl story to get used to your body moving on your own so fast...
Edit: chap 36
not so good anymore
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TLDR: It’s bland after a while.
It’s good, it’s just a bit too drawn out to hold my attention. It also leaves a bit too many things for ones mind to imagine, while imagining things in books is good it’s not when it’s the entire base of the story. We don’t even get a half decent description of the MC (As of now). If this becomes trending again I will pick it up but otherwise the story is quite lackluster.
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-- review removed because it had a reboot.
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MC starts off very dumb, gets a skill and has to inner monologue on if he just possessed someone because of the possession skill he literally just got. Add to the fact that none of the events in the first 5 chapters are in anyway related to the MC because he has no agency and even has the 'body moves without my input' cliche just to have a forced kissing scene before anything has been investigated or explained. It's basically watching a robot that has the most basic human emotions, stunted intelligence and was programmed to do stupid things without being made aware of said programming.
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This story started out pretty good, but got a little... boring I guess? So why the 5 star?
I decided to write a review here after catching up with the chapters written on the author's Patreon. And I gotta say that this story has gotten much better! There are two new girls that have potential to be in his harem, and oh boy...
The part where Hiroki brutally kills that lord was so satisfying! I thought he would be dense and heroic but I was wrong! He acted like a ghost with hate!
Will be writing more updates here after reading more chapters!
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Fun and charming story with a slow start and frankly bizzare tags/genre that as of ch 34 make zero sense, so don't judge whether to read the story based on them alone.
The protagonists' relationship (the main focus of the story so far) is very enjoyable and although unexpectedly fast to begin, is handled well.
Lots of potential for story and interaction with other characters for future chapters
'Dungeon arc' can be a drag so I'd recommend skimming through it for the dialogue, author clearly set an 'X number of floors' and ran out of ideas half way through
Overall a fun, somewhat lighthearted novel (a lot more chill than the tags make it out to be) with a great twist, a very downtrodden and shy (early-Raphtalia sort of) female lead and caring (if slightly boring) main character.
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A really nice and warm story isekai story.
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Shut down a few of your brain cells and this novel will be amazing to read.
It does have lots of conversations which is a turn off for me, but the pacing of this novel is what kept me going.
It's not that great, but because of some readers that kept complaining, I'm going to give this book a 5/5
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The story reviews will be as followed
1) The Plot
The plot is simple and easy to understand just a ghost reincarnated from earth with a trusty companion in this otherworld named Aya trying to find what his purpose here is or why he's here refreshingly done with this simple plot the execution is not bad like a certain troll in comment that keep criticising the author so far
2) Characters
The characters are all true to the starting impression simple to understand a thug a good hearted receptionist a homeless girl trying to make a living and a ghost each bit too 1-dimensional so far they have the illusion of being a living being which is a pretty good feat to be found here in scribble hub of all places kudos to the author
3) Grammar
Currently no problem in this regard either
All in all I give this a 5 star a good story a good simple cast of character and a coherent writing if J-manga with a simple and light hearted premise with a suspenseful undertone is your style then this one will fit perfectly into your collection that and if you came here wanting fast paced super intelligent MC and not a run of the mill boy then this wouldn't tickle your fancy the story holds high potential from my current view
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It's a bit slow paced which I find fitting for the story, it focuses on the relationship between the MC and the female leads.
The dungeon arc early on was a bit of a drag in my opinion, but everything is fine.
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