The plot is confusing. The characters doesn't have something you can relate on or even visualize of... it was as if, they only exist and move just for the sake of the progression of the story. Another thing, our MC is kind of naive despite he or rather she, has walk through and been tempered by the war. Most of the veterans that I can think of, already discard their naivety after they had been send out of the battlefield. But our MC... acts as if he or she is a typical Japanese MC... which is disappointing

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Could not get past the terrible grammar, I'm sorry.

The story seems to have an interesting concept and it MAY even be good, but I just... can't. To me, this is just unreadable. Dropped. Maybe I'll pick it back up if the grammar ever gets fixed, but as it is, it just feels like a badly translated foreign novel.

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if you can pass the overly written dialogue and the quite confusing start and you're going to see a really good story with heavyly backgrounded protagonist with complex subplots interesting characters, good fight scenes and political intrigue that makes you want to see more also a monter girl harem that actually makes part of the plot and do stuff but in the and this is a novel about family and how to not let your problems kill it 

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Stories are like pizza: less is more. This story is like a pizza that you threw everything in your fridge on, completel indiscriminately.

Thus far, there has been a story about the main character being sent on a secret mission to retrieve a mac guffin, but his superiors and fellow soldiers don't know about this mission, so he has to navigate a war while unsure of who he can trust. Okay. That's a good enough premise. I like it. Sounds interesting, 200 chapters might be a bit much, but it's interesting enough.

Except in chapter 7 the stories premise changes from "Protagonist has been put in the body of the secret superweapon and has to escape before the geniuses who decided the best way to stop them from being forced to do things against their will is to blow them up, blow them up!"

Okay that's interesting too and the transition was done a little smoother than 10 grit sandpaper, so fair enough.

Come chapter 13 and suddenly we're in heaven? Why are we in heaven? What even are the stakes of the story anymore? Why the f**k should I care about a story that's suffering an identity-crisis and has no idea what it wants to be and changes premise seemingly every 6-7 chapters? You tell me because I very much can't find myself caring.

And that is ignoring the glaring grammar errors, which normally I wouldn't mention in a review, but it's SO bad that you have to stare at a paragraph for minutes at a time to piece together what the f**k is happening from context clues. Also the author does this stupid thing where they make it seem like multiple people are talking but in reality it's just one person.

Seriously. This:The man began to list all the reasons for his conclusion.

"The staging was closed from the inside."

"That you have casual wear all in white."

"That you know that soon they will call me."

"That an unknown woman appeared after 1 month at sea on an aircraft carrier, one of the safest places in the world is strange"

" Algo we have known each other for a time now"

"I can keep giving arguments about it"

Is as far as I can tell ONE person speaking.

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From what I read my review is the same with others.

To me I can only say is super cringe, typical Japanese MC, Naive hero you should change he/she character to villain or anti hero personality 

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What can I say the grammar is completely sh*t the points of view change randomly within the same sentence genders change randomly first person is used to narrate others actions from the MCs perspective if that's eve. Possible and from reading this it seems to be so other than that the plot is quite interesting and I'd say there's at least an outline around the story so the author at least knows where they're going with it essentially it reads like a crappy Mtl novel and you should wait to read it until it's been edited into understandable English yes my grammar is bud but that's cuz I'm not writing a story and so don't care

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This rating only apply up to c13

Confusing to read but comprehensible to an extend. Really interesting setup.

After end of that arc, I really hope to see more survival and gritty stuff. But author just has to smash my expectation to oblivion.

Not only that I no longer have ability to understand plot. Few things that I can salvage are indicated that story moving toward more lighthearted and randomness.

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