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Young Master Has a Daughter
Young Master Has a Daughter
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      Status: chapter 17 – the banquet
      Dec 7, 2020

      I think it is still a bit early for a review, but wanting to bring some light to this novel, I decided to write it anyway.

      So, let's start with the overall feeling the story gave me. Based on the 17 chapters I have read, I would say that this story is comparable to a child who started cultivating at the age of 3 years. It has the same potential. There is certainly a good premise. For now, what we have is: a generous helping of geniuses for cultivation. Several pinches of arrogant young masters. A little sprinkle of court intrigue. A simple, generic, but our most beloved cruel cultivation world. AND among all this, the cherry on the top - the father-daughter relationship, which, seemingly only just started, but already brings some much needed sugar among all the salt and pepper, which all the cultivation stories like to rub on our eyes.

      The world-building is somewhat lacking, but it is understandable as the story has only just started. Plus, I can see that author most likely wants to explore the world through the MC and add in details through his little daughter. One such example that comes to mind is when the little girl recites the names of various beasts that are most likely somewhat relevant in the story.

      The style is semi-serious cultivation with a sprinkle of comedy as well as father-daughter fluff. (Which I actually hope to see more as the story progresses)

      The characters have only been introduced, so we need to wait to see their motivations, but as I already said, they have potential.

      The only complaint I have is that some chapters are a little bit short, but that is understandable, especially considering the very promising release speed of the chapters.

      In conclusion, it is a bit early to judge the story based on the content we have, but the sprout is there and the only thing that needs to be done is to steadily water the little tree.

      Actually, it is the first time I am doing a review on this site and second time I am doing it at all. So! Take! It! With! A! Grain! Of! Salt!

      Ah! Right! Totally forgot. The grammar in the story is decent and personally I do not have complaints. It is not only readable, but also better than average. So, you can quell all the apprehension regarding that part.

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