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Empress’ Evolution
Empress’ Evolution
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The bright red light of the flames swallowed her vision but soon that red light transformed into a blue hue and she was dragged into that light.

‘What’s happening?’

It was too bright and she was forced to close her eyes, she was blinded — even though she was already dead.

After being pulled into the light she began to feel annoyed as her skin was irritated by some kind of rough sand.

By the time she opened her eyes. She could see the full view of the sky. It was blue and there were clouds scattered about.

‘Ugh, is this Hell?’

She stated as she rubbed her head with her fluffy and furry ‘hand’.

‘Furry?’

She looked at her ‘hands’ and her mouth opened wide. Her hands had become soft and fluffy paws of a white-furred beast with purple spots.

‘What the hell?’

She touched her face with her paws and confirmed that it too did not belong to a human. Below, she felt something was moving, she can tell as if it was another limb connected to her.

‘Don’t tell me!’

Turning her head around, she found a seven-inch tail sticking out behind.

‘Phew!’ She felt relieved that it wasn’t what she thought it was.

"These soft paws, this cuddly and fluffy hair, this cute tail — ah shit, did I become a beast after my death, or have I been dreaming of being human as a beast all this time? If it is the latter, that is one long and realistic dream."

[It’s the former, stupid bitch.]

Said a woman’s voice from in her head.

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As always thank you for reading, also the image on the cover is not mine, I found it on Pinterest and thought it was cool and suitable. All credits got to the illustrator.

Also, this is a new type of story that I have not read about yet. Basically, I am writing an evolution novel without prior knowledge so I don't really know what is considered cliche in this genre.

I will be posting this story on RoyalRoad.com

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Cunning Protagonist Cute Protagonist Cute Story Depictions of Cruelty Determined Protagonist Evolution Game Elements Game Ranking System Gods Level System Monster Society Monsters Mythology Post-apocalyptic Race Change Ruthless Protagonist Teamwork World Hopping World Invasion World Tree
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    mitkopom
    Status: c20

    well, I personally didn't like the story.

    It follows the "adventures" of a cold, ruthless freak who slaughters everything demons, beasts and humans. An enemy of humanity for sure. A true monster which makes Hitler looks like a kind boy scout.

    How I am supposed to sympathize to a such of a freak? A terrible premise that basically ruins the pleasure and makes me frustrated of her actions.

    So the story sucks: one star

    the world building is fine and litrpg elements are ok but very complicated so at one point I was just skipping the level ups descriptions

    world building and backgrounds: 4 stars

    characters: I already mentioned that MC is a terrible monster. I hate her. The other characters are fine but are destined to become slaves (servants)   of MC

    so characters : 1 star

    Grammar is excellent, dialogues are easy to understand, story is presented flawless. It is obvious that author is very talented.

    Grammar : 5 stars

    Overall: I personally didn't like the story- mostly because of the terrible deep sh*t that is the MC. I do believe that there will be people who would enjoy it. So give it a try. Read to chapter 20 and chose for yourself

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    Mukson
    Status: c98. dhampy and kristina

    Great read for a specific type of person, try the first few chapters; if you like it: you'll love it (it gets better). If not: don't bother, it gets darker

    Our protagonist is a cold, calculating, but somehow lovable little monster.

    She commits genocide before gassing and then burning children

    She tortures, dismembers and amputates limbs from prisoners

    She dropkicks a puppy in front of starving children, twice

    All the while the little devil's every action is misinterpreted by her followers as that of a benevolent saint.

    Out protagonist, everyone!

    She is -in my disgustingly humble opinion- absolutely hilarious to watch simply be unleashed on the lovingly world-built world. She gets wasted with and repeatedly berates a goddess, makes a pact with a literal hound of hell, pretends to strategize whilst having an internal insult contest with an AI and swears to eradicate all of Olympus Kratos-style for hurting her doggo whilst somehow remaining a grounded realist to a terrifying degree.

    Best part? She's not OP. She's strong but has to play glorified support. Unlike so many other reincarnated protagonists, most of her followers could swat her like a fly. She has to rely on being a sly, manipulative little sh*t to survive and it makes the story that much more unique.

    If you appreciate absurdity and dark/gory humor this will be one of your favorite novels; minor grammar errors be damned.

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    Friedrice
    Status: c50

    I think it's pretty good. Some parts are gory, but the unjustified random murder parts are quite rare.

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    Hollex
    Status: 103. how to train your human...

    There is battles, massacres and tortures and the story is really not bad. But there is a lot of mistakes that even I am not an English speaker can find in the writing. But for me the worst is the quote below.

    Spoiler

    MC:"Are you willing to go and fight with the corruption of this stronghold and help me create a better future for both daemons and humans?"

    [collapse]

    If you like protagonist that does masacres for the better good even when It is agains her nature of a monster, then this is your novel.

    Also there is not "s*xual content" in the novel so no smut.

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    FBI-Sama
    Status: 50. failing to see the forest...

    I mean, this will be a pretty short review but a well earned one. 

    I will not lie, there are quite some bullsh*t moments that I don't really agree with or don't make any sense. Though most of the time, the only problem are a few grammar and writing errors that are easily fixed. 

    The story, world and character building are great and the MC doesn't get OP too quickly, and while her underlings are pretty loyal they are no mindless idiots that follow every command to the T. Without any doubt. 

    So, pretty much a 4.9/5 

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    QuakeMidaro
    Status: 1. it’s the former, you...

    Honestly first off the grammar and story world is good only detriment to this story and this is arguably a deal breaking detriment is the MC burn that bitch in a fire and make a new MC she’s glorified support at best and a f**king leech whose only means of being somewhat successful is manipulating those around her she’s useless by herself and honestly it’s just not fun to read about a useless MC who can’t fend for themselves she’s meant to eventually be an Empress not a useless sack of garbage only thing she’s got going for her is... well nothing comes to mind that’s not a good MC 

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