By Skalugsuak_Hakarl
Vulilognan Shissurna is the newest Warship of the Mezhained Golden fleet. Built in record time to aid her sisters in a war against an unknown power she is considered a miracle Ship. With a terrifying glee and the ability to defiantly go beyond the
It's not bad, a few rough edges at places but likeable.
An interesting start with characters that feel fleshed out.
Feel like the fantasy world twist really makes it go down hill though.
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Needs a lot of work. The character building was good from the first ten chapters and then after they discovered planets and an alien race. Things started to get out of hand.
I really don’t like how the characters have no central awareness and the world building sucks. I’m sorry author but this is my opinion.
A good book for the patient of mind.
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