The plot and characters make this fun to read. So before you read my list of criticism. This was enjoy to read.
It is was good in the beginning. Even though I had to read twice some chapter since the grammer didn't make sense. My complaint is the grammer took a nose dive in later chapter to the point I couldn't understand what was going on and decided to stop reading. It wasn't just grammer mistakes the author didn't add enough words to make character line make sense, it was choppy sentenses and lines
Insert Meme: GODZILLA HAD A STROKE READING THIS STORY.
Another major issue is we don't know which character prospective we reading from. We go from the main character, husband, back to main character, to side character. It jumps around.
All in all
The plot I will give it 3 out 5 stars
Grammer is 1 out 5 stars, later chapters are google translate bad.
Characters are 4 out 5, honestly their fun to read.
I'm mad because this could have been a fun story if the grammer was better and the author added seperator between prospective changes.
I died with a dagger stuck in my heart. I had no choice but to face and accept my death. But when I woke up, I was in a different body.
They called me “Princess.” Sure, cool.
Now, in this new life, I have become a differe
The first volume has been taken down due to the Amazon release.
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My name is Tim, or it was until I died. There was no light at the end of the tunnel, no white room to choose any cheats f
Born into prestige and gifted with talent, Pascal was a promising officer cadet whose deeds caught even the King’s gaze. At the mere age of twenty, he had everything a young, ambitious man could need to begin a promising career.
Excep
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Synopsis:
Keith, a
The plot and characters make this fun to read. So before you read my list of criticism. This was enjoy to read.
It is was good in the beginning. Even though I had to read twice some chapter since the grammer didn't make sense. My complaint is the grammer took a nose dive in later chapter to the point I couldn't understand what was going on and decided to stop reading. It wasn't just grammer mistakes the author didn't add enough words to make character line make sense, it was choppy sentenses and lines
Insert Meme: GODZILLA HAD A STROKE READING THIS STORY.
Another major issue is we don't know which character prospective we reading from. We go from the main character, husband, back to main character, to side character. It jumps around.
All in all
The plot I will give it 3 out 5 stars
Grammer is 1 out 5 stars, later chapters are google translate bad.
Characters are 4 out 5, honestly their fun to read.
I'm mad because this could have been a fun story if the grammer was better and the author added seperator between prospective changes.
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