This was a fun ride we've had. I recommend new, old, and returning authors to give this a read. I've been here watching this masterpiece grow and explore new areas. The only thing I have to say is: On behalf of your friends and readers we wish you well and luck in your next adventure. We also wish for you to take a bow.

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gender bender will always be a plus 5 for me as it teaches people about gender equality and also the uncertainties of the story gives me 5/5 in entertainment 

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It is known that vampires do not have a reflection in the mirror.

It is known that vampires cannot cross bodies of running water on their own, cannot cross bridges on their own, cannot use boats on their own, and so on, so all the above described about bathing does not fit into the vampire paradigm at all.

Vampires can command animals, they can turn into fog or bats, so these skills must be racial for a vampire and available when they are born.

A vampire is the highest undead of a demonic type, he spends daylight hours in a Coffin and draws magical power from the earth in which he was buried. In the first chapters, where the heroine was hiding from the sun in the roots of a tree, everything was reliable, but then the author got carried away and everything went awry.

The author should pay more attention to the study of the issue before starting to write, otherwise it turns out not a vampire, but some kind of oxymoron and laugh stock.

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I wont pretend I read super far, bit all I can say is that I dislike this novel because the protagonist is kinda annoyingly stupid.

 The way that the thought process of the MC is written makes it seem like the MC is somewhat clever, but if you take a step back and just look at it........

Even in the first 2 chapters she seems to change her mind about somthing or forget about somthing at the drop of a hat. 

What kind of idiot thinks stuff like "oh the sun doesnt hurt me therefore im not a vampire even though I choose that race. Might as well forget about somthing like blood, lets go find some food" *finds rabbit and cooks it after being led to it by the smell of blood from an illogical distance away*

Overall I just really dislike stories where the MC is portrayed like someone at least a little smart, yet cant even protray a seemingly average persons intelligence.

She just doesnt have the slightest bit of preparedness or creativity at most times. Cant solve simple problems for no reason at all. Lacks the ability to think in any creative or personal matter.

Cant check fangs?

Breeding for a vampire is 100% s*xual for sure mr geek you sure know your stuff except for when it matters.

How many tries before you get to the keyword "status"???

Ideas from earth should not work here. This rule fr9m earth says... on earth this, on earth that.

f**k earth im so sick of it, why was it said it has no relation if its going to keep being brought up for useless stuff.

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8/10. If this were a bought novel. 15/10 on scribblehub. 

Some strong Mushoku Tensei vibes... im expecting tragedy soon!

If you love vengeful giga Chads who collect 2d people and have a simple reactionary morality, this probably isnt for you:

-The MC has a new body and new hormonal system ~and a few other unexpected influences of mind.

• Smart fight scenes, non tedious town building.
• Thoughtful protagonist with usual "isekai introverted MC" flaws. eg: Overthinking, underthinking, impatient, love-starved, etc.
• Meaningful relationships without tedious details.
• Deep but only on fighting, drama, culture injection/food.
• Mysterious lore bits, non-jarring char development, pacing, and scene description. 
• Lack of obvious oversights from MC, implied smart characters, and author.

The early stage MC tends not to meddle if the moral implications are overwhelming. This MC is pretty much a tireless, non perverted, introverted, amiable, impulsively-responsible, lover of comfort. Don't expect impervious personality because events and lore subtly influence it. The MC is turned off by authority that is neglectful/opportunistic/scary?/demanding.  TAKE CARE after social stuff or you will miss reasons for morality tweaking. Eg. MC helps without follow-up and regrets it, learning from oversight

I hope religious stuff gets a little more love since it's a major theme. 

I also hope she finds an aspirational, smart, benevolent god-like that also fights against her cos causality shenanigans! I dont expect it tho.

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  I cannot bring myself to read this anymore, really liked the begining from chapter 0 to 35, but then things changed focus, it wasn't what I began reading for. 

  I could tolerate the following chapters and such because there was at least a hint of development in the horizon, I sincerely hoped Scarlet would make her wishes know, say to Claret that she's not the previous Scarlet and to Alicia that she's not her mother, but no she never did, and that brought us here, to 102.

  Scarlet is completely inconsistent, and this last chapter I read was the drop of water, this bullsh*t about pregnancy and the sudden 180 about it doesn't sound believable, it may make sense in your head but it doesn't in mine.

  I'm not the best at reviews and I sincerely cannot put into words exactly what I feel about this, it just infuriates me deeply.

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i enjoy most of the chapter but I hate when it become cooking and the child see ok at first but I think their just super jealous person.

dont mind it. 

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So far so good

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The story has meat in it, it's a good idea imo but action scenes are really boring to read, other than the MC being an airhead I dont have much complaints

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Found another gem, please keep up the good work.

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