When I saw a pokemon fanfiction I was like "this isn't going to make any sense, pokemon can't be made into an interesting novel because of how much nonsense is in it (I love pokemon but there's a lot of nonsense) " but I was so wrong as soon as I started reading Finn's notes I knew this was going to be a pokemon world that made sense, after that each chapter pulled me in further and made this world seem more real. I can't wait for the next chapter and will continue reading this novel for a long time.

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If I'm honest, it's not bad... but since you chose to mention blushes and anime expressions at every opportunity, I was sincerely fed up. Okay, but honestly not even in a romance anime do they mention blush as much as you in an entire chapter. Expressions enter the same way. Although technically the story is not bad, I feel a little cringe. I mean, that insurance is for early romance, but there is nothing wrong... I think the club thing is what implements it.

Now, some things I did not like, like the club, but I know that was that you did not introduce it in one more way... I do not know... it did not feel natural.

I will try to give my honest rating and I really recommend this fanfic. It's just not really to my taste. I've seen so many wacky fanfics with exaggerated anime expressions that I'm honestly tired. (I mean, it's hard to tell a flustered person in real life, but so good.)

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The story is really well made. I enjoyed this very much and I am hoping for more.

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I have to say that this is a great story. The pacing is good, the characters are good, and the overall writing is good. On top of all that the author shows that they listen to the readers and is willing to make changes if the readers want it which is a great thing. While infrequent the r18 parts are done pretty well too. I would definitely recommend reading this story if you have the chance, which you do since it's free!

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