So to preface I really, really tried to give this a shot. It’s at the top of girls love, surely it must have some quality right? Wrong. It’s incredibly generic as fanfic goes. Instead of doing a lot of it’s own plot, as others have said it’s essentially Naruto but somehow made even more generic and even a bit more s*xist. &Nbsp;         

It’s made worse, in my opinion by how utterly unlikeable the main character is. First off, she’s deeply emotionally manipulative even toward her own family, even teaching them to do it to each other and strangers as ‘jokes’. Next, our heroine is a bit too competent. She should be given her past life, but there are many, many times where it breaks from believability how she’s able to succeed and manipulate others so effortlessly. And finally, she’s just kind of nigh psychopathic the way she looks at the world. To her it’s not full of real people but things like ants and side characters etc. Theres also her lack of genuine compassion outside of very specific circumstances. &Nbsp;                                  

But the parts that bothered me the most was the writing. Not only does the main character drop the r slur casually (yes, r*tard is a slur). This wouldn’t be an issue if it was treated with tact, or shown in a different light but in this case is almost treated as comedic the way she has used them. Next is just the prose itself, while being mostly functional it’s incredibly clunky. There are some very odd overused descriptors, weird dialogue choices and the odd choice to include coughs and laughs into the dialogue. &Nbsp;          

Overall my biggest gripe for this story that is under the girls love tag doesn’t really feel like girls love? Yes the main character is attracted to having a harem of women, but our main character never actually says she’s a lesbian. It might sound like a weird gripe, but girls love is kind of inherently a very gay genre lol. It feels odd that it’s not ever really properly brought up. Even more so it oddly seems utterly averse to addressing ANY topic tangentially related to queerness. So, if you want that in your girls love stay away.

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I enjoy reading this immensely. 

Plot is pretty much exactly as advertised, OP MC is Naruto's sister and helps smooth out the plotline. 

I enjoy how she breaks common sense for everyone around her, I like how Naruto is no longer an idiot. 

I especially like that the MC isn't a psychopath or dumb as a doorknob while being touted as a genius and very smart. (Shakes fist at madara's dumbass grandson)  

The harem angle is something I'd rather not have, especially considering that the characters are 12 year olds. But thankfully, there is no actual s*xual content yet. But yikes on the grooming. I just have to forcefully pretend that everyone is 18 instead of 12 to read the story that I like. I truly don't get why characters need to be 8 or 12 year old geniuses who are also s*xually mature. 12 year olds are usually just idiots who barely understand sh*t. Japan has a lot of great stuff, but let them keep their pedophilia sympathizing to themselves. I truly want to knock of a couple of stars for this alone, but I do like the story, so I'll keep it at 5 stars and imagine that all characters are 18, since they behave like they are 18 anyway. 

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At 200+ chapters in, we really should be getting more plot than lewd stuff, not to mention the lewd stuff is all just bait cause nothing more explicit then heavy kissing has occurred the ENTIRE story so far, not even fade to black. The harem is also not enjoyable anymore, a yandere and a masochistic get boring and even annoying when you milk them for content and filler literally every chapter. I think this story would be vastly improved by the removal of the harem.

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"When does it get good?" Is all I'm currently asking myself. Honestly, I was expecting the MC to run off and do her own thing immediately and then interfere with the story here and there. Instead it's just "what if we turned Naruto into a bad generic-OP-isekai?"

This is the first ever fan fiction I've read, so maybe this is actually really good for a fanfiction? If so I guess I'll stay as far away from them as possible.

Update: I wrote this review after reading chapter 38, and now I'm on chapter 58 where nothing has changed, so I've decided to drop it. There's literally nothing redeeming about this story. It's just a bottom of the barrel isekai.

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Let me start by saying, I am not a big fan of Naruto but I absolutely love this novel. Normally fanfics tend to have a tendency of having characters with bland 1D personality. But, this novel really captures their original personality with Author own unique twist on it. The character interactions are really smooth & entertaining, never once I felt bored reading it. I really like the interaction between MC and Kurama, its really fun reading their banter. Also, the romance in the novel doesn't feel rushed, it feet more natural & smooth, especially Hinata & MC interactions are really damn cute (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ) .

Author-san keep up the good work ヾ (≧▽≦*) o. I really hope Author-san complete this novel properly and wouldn't drop it halfway. 

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Man, when I started this I didn't have high hopes, I saw several Naruto fanfics and never was amused, but this one is good, incredible good. The comedy is so well done that I only found myself laughing out loud after the fact, and several times my family asked me why am I snickering hahaha. I recommend this story very much.

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Love it. Top tier. Read the whole thing twice. The sense of humor is great and there's lots of poking fun at all of the aspects of the original plot that seem a little dumb in retrospect. I'm not really into cultivation stories these days but this type of connection is brilliant. Will tune in for every update!

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This stories idea is wonderful, why not use a god level cultivator instead of some naruto otaku who knows everything. I for one have not seem this concept used in a naruto fanfic and so far its been very good. The MC is funny and I am just waiting to see some classic cultivation novel faceslapping coming Danzo's way. I bet she steals zabuza sword and enchants to to fly as a toy for her precious little bro.

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I normally don't really like naruto novels but this was a super fun and good read, there wasn't an obscene amount of lewd chapters which happens a lot so that already made it better, the personality changes were also good and yuna herself and the concept around her is also really good.

So if you plan on writing another novel, I'm looking forward to it, I wish you good luck

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if I can give separate between first introduction arc and the rest.... 5 stars and 2 stars

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