Alright, so, out of 5 stars, I rate this a 4.5-4.8. I don't really have any major criticisms other than the fight scenes becoming a bit boring. Just felt repetitive after a while and I just began skimming them to skip towards some character interaction or the more excitable events and fights. 

So to properly begin:

The humor is top class, 5/5 hands down, no questions asked. I f**king love the humor and so far, this is the most hilarious fic I've read in this platform. Yunas personality makes it even better too, it goes so well and it's smooth af. 

The characters are good. I've seen a few complaints about how these children are getting together and what not, but honestly, I don't understand it. If you want to complain about children getting together in f**king Naruto, then start complaining about how they're child soldiers. Raised to kill at birth, like bruh, they're probably more mature than we are since they probably get a confirmed kill when they're 14 during flipping peace times. Its just Lowkey fusterating hearing people say how the romance bugs them the wring way, and not how, oh idk, they're f**king child soldiers indoctrinated to be tools of war to be used and killed for the benefits of others. Rant aside let's continue. 

The characters are well done, I love Yuna. I love her Love mates, and I love how Sasuke, Naruto and 3rd Hokage was done. Especially sasuke, it's honestly hilarious how he ends up. 

The story is pretty good, I havnt finished Naruto, nor do I plan too, but from my knowledge it stuck to the main story, just with the added benefit of Yuna Chaos. And let me say, the story has sone great added benefits of just being flat out chaotic as that is Yuna. Some went wrong? It's Yuna. Cake in the face? You know it. It's Yuna. 

Fight scenes weren't bad, hell they were good in my opinion. But I don't think you'll come reading this novel for the fights. It's not my driving factor, and like mentioned, they get repetitive after a while. 

The English is good, just a few spelling mistakes here and there, but that's normal. The Writing Style is good too, no complaints and I quite like it. It shares parts of all POVs a little bit like Dune, but not as info packed where you gotta stop every paragraph just to digest it. Hell, it's mainly just Yuna with the other MCs here and there. 

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I enjoy reading this immensely. 

Plot is pretty much exactly as advertised, OP MC is Naruto's sister and helps smooth out the plotline. 

I enjoy how she breaks common sense for everyone around her, I like how Naruto is no longer an idiot. 

I especially like that the MC isn't a psychopath or dumb as a doorknob while being touted as a genius and very smart. (Shakes fist at madara's dumbass grandson)  

The harem angle is something I'd rather not have, especially considering that the characters are 12 year olds. But thankfully, there is no actual s*xual content yet. But yikes on the grooming. I just have to forcefully pretend that everyone is 18 instead of 12 to read the story that I like. I truly don't get why characters need to be 8 or 12 year old geniuses who are also s*xually mature. 12 year olds are usually just idiots who barely understand sh*t. Japan has a lot of great stuff, but let them keep their pedophilia sympathizing to themselves. I truly want to knock of a couple of stars for this alone, but I do like the story, so I'll keep it at 5 stars and imagine that all characters are 18, since they behave like they are 18 anyway. 

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At 200+ chapters in, we really should be getting more plot than lewd stuff, not to mention the lewd stuff is all just bait cause nothing more explicit then heavy kissing has occurred the ENTIRE story so far, not even fade to black. The harem is also not enjoyable anymore, a yandere and a masochistic get boring and even annoying when you milk them for content and filler literally every chapter. I think this story would be vastly improved by the removal of the harem.

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Let me start by saying, I am not a big fan of Naruto but I absolutely love this novel. Normally fanfics tend to have a tendency of having characters with bland 1D personality. But, this novel really captures their original personality with Author own unique twist on it. The character interactions are really smooth & entertaining, never once I felt bored reading it. I really like the interaction between MC and Kurama, its really fun reading their banter. Also, the romance in the novel doesn't feel rushed, it feet more natural & smooth, especially Hinata & MC interactions are really damn cute (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ) .

Author-san keep up the good work ヾ (≧▽≦*) o. I really hope Author-san complete this novel properly and wouldn't drop it halfway. 

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"When does it get good?" Is all I'm currently asking myself. Honestly, I was expecting the MC to run off and do her own thing immediately and then interfere with the story here and there. Instead it's just "what if we turned Naruto into a bad generic-OP-isekai?"

This is the first ever fan fiction I've read, so maybe this is actually really good for a fanfiction? If so I guess I'll stay as far away from them as possible.

Update: I wrote this review after reading chapter 38, and now I'm on chapter 58 where nothing has changed, so I've decided to drop it. There's literally nothing redeeming about this story. It's just a bottom of the barrel isekai.

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Man, when I started this I didn't have high hopes, I saw several Naruto fanfics and never was amused, but this one is good, incredible good. The comedy is so well done that I only found myself laughing out loud after the fact, and several times my family asked me why am I snickering hahaha. I recommend this story very much.

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This stories idea is wonderful, why not use a god level cultivator instead of some naruto otaku who knows everything. I for one have not seem this concept used in a naruto fanfic and so far its been very good. The MC is funny and I am just waiting to see some classic cultivation novel faceslapping coming Danzo's way. I bet she steals zabuza sword and enchants to to fly as a toy for her precious little bro.

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I normally don't really like naruto novels but this was a super fun and good read, there wasn't an obscene amount of lewd chapters which happens a lot so that already made it better, the personality changes were also good and yuna herself and the concept around her is also really good.

So if you plan on writing another novel, I'm looking forward to it, I wish you good luck

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Absolutely great. Great characters, great story, great execution. I recommend this for anyone who is tired of the typical isekai where the MC is bland as can be and a story to match with him. This is anything but bland. Each arc is exciting to read and has had epic twists on the old Naruto storyline. Yuna, our protagonist (?), is well developed as a character, from relatively realistic choices and views on the world, with enough insanity to keep her interesting no matter what she's doing. The side characters are vastly different from the Original story making each interaction unique. They are also well written with storylines of their own and help expand the plot beyond just what Yuna does.

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Love it. Top tier. Read the whole thing twice. The sense of humor is great and there's lots of poking fun at all of the aspects of the original plot that seem a little dumb in retrospect. I'm not really into cultivation stories these days but this type of connection is brilliant. Will tune in for every update!

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