So far, I don't like the MC. He's evil but not exactly the self-serving kind (which is the kind I like) : He gaslights Robin, instead of forming a relationship with her (and her intellect is braindead in this for some reason) ; he 'befriends' people who have or will have bounties while thinking "I may have to cash in on your bounty later (I'm so smart) *chuckle*" - he worth billions and thinks this garbage, so I would not call him selfish at this point, but hammy and stupid.

The lemons are skipped over, why? What's the point of a power trip where you don't highlight the benefits of power??

Also, he gets scientific power out of nowhere. Eww.

All and all, he's not the type of villain I'd like, no fun to be had imo.

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caincrux

Status: c17

Dec 19, 2021

Amateur writing style. The "they're doing x but I do y because I'm better' kind of self hype type of MC. The plot is very thin and aggravated by bouts of ego boasting moments. The kind of writing style similar to chinese without the nationalism but is gearing up for face slapping. Doesnt have much content outside of mc' current scenario.

The MC barely had any personality, most of the time it is like the author explaining instead of MC acting on his personality. He will start a display of character then there will be monologue explaining why he does it.

Tldr: most of the fic is tell not show

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Mornelith24

Status: death

Jul 30, 2021

I gave up on this story, not one for me I am afraid. I dont have problems with evil MC - but he is wasting good chics :) best part is his primary goal is revenge against guys who wronged him, but he has nothing against wronging other people the same way or worse. he wailed at first that his dad got kiled by corupted people, and "friends" turn their back against them - and what is he doing ? manipulating, brainwashing, kiling good girls just cause he wants "pawns" . Srry its to sick for me.

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ImmortalMaou_sama

Status: c274

Dec 15, 2022

A Good fanfic, moreover it's complete. Which is super rare among fanfiction.

I like the story. MC is smart, careful, a bit too much of a Psychopath for my taste but it's fine. The story more than makes up for it. And I like how many original things are there in this fic, it's not a copy of One Piece world. The Author is very creative and came up with lots of new things, the story of Joyboy and Im-sama. The Haki power system. Even the Ancient weapons (Pluton being an earthworm bio-mecha was awesome) and the moon people.

There are also a lot of things I dislike though. The ending for one, it could have been ended after the death of Im-sama, the story honestly became boring after that. But I can still understand why the story has to be extend until he becomes Omnipotent since that was MC's plan since day 1. The other thing I absolutely hate is what happened with Robin. The starting arc where MC manipulates Robin was the only part where she was important. After that she just became a background character who either manages MC's kingdom or shows us how much a psycho our MC is, she didn't even get a proper ending.

Overall, great story but disappointing ending. Still pretty awesome.

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